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| "I'll Cover You" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: H-Girl69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 15:41 CDT
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I leave reviews at ff.net but when I saw a whole 8 reviews here I just had to add one more. 1.) you are updating like crazy right now Awesome 2.) this story totally rocks!! 3.) MediaMiner members are the most non-reviewing people ever! OK, so you can ignore me now. ;-)
| Title: Not Bad
Reviewed By: LynnGryphon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First lemon is definitely not bad. Nice touch with the seme Iruka. I have most definitely read worse and I can tell you that it is probably better than the little I have dancing around in my head. How do you put imagination like that properly to paper? No idea, but you did good! Kudos and update soon!
| Reviewed By: H-Girl69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love that you made Iruka seme! I already reviewed at FF, but wanted to post a thumbs up here too.
| Reviewed By: randomHime On: March 30, 2006 06:31 CST
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I still see ways to make this a SasuNaru fic.cause Sakura needs to get her eyes spooned out with a SPORK
| Reviewed By: PrincesaDeCisne7-13 On: March 03, 2006 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, me again *sigh* i LOVE chapter 8 you see this part: "Iruka, I'm home!" Kakashi's head appeared through the crack in the bedroom door. Rain dripped unceromoniously of of his tufts of hair down onto the floor. Groceries were slung all around him. "I made an appointment for you to see Raven tomorrow for your meds. Were you bored--" Kakashi cut himself off with one look at Iruka's face. The younger man was pale and drawn, sitting on the far edge of Kakashi's overly large bed. His knees were drawn up against his chest, and his hair was hanging in greasy strands around his face. Deep shadows were etched under wide, scared eyes. The groceries fell to the ground. "Iruka," Kakashi whispered, darting to his lover's side. He scooped Iruka's into his arms. Unable to help himself, the chuunin tried to blink back hot tears. "It's okay, Love, it's okay." Iruka tensed. "Ka...Kakashi?" "Iruka?" "Do you mean it?" Kakashi blinked, halfway through pulling down his mask. "What?" "When you call me Love. When you say that you love me." "Iruka..." Kakashi sighed. He pulled the young man into his arms. "I have always loved you. Ever since I saw you, ever since before I saw you I think, I have been madly in love with you. I only wish that I could take all of the poison from your veins and keep it. I don't want to see you in pain, Iruka. I know that I'm a bastard. I don't deserve you. I won't ever deserve you." "But I need you. I'm a selfish, perverted prick and I will never let you go. I love you too much to let anyone else have you. You mean so much to me... more than anything else. I love you so much it hurts, Iruka." Kakashi leaned down and nuzzled into Iruka's neck. "Do you want more of an explanation, my love?" Iruka sighed, letting out a contented breath. "No, My Kakashi." Kakashi wasn't like Mizuki. Kakashi wouldn't turn out like Mizuki. He was sure of it. Yes, a better future. "I believe you." Iruka turned to look at his scarecrow. Kakashi was peering down at him, concern easily noticable in his eyes. Iruka leaned up, no hesitation, and planted a loving kiss on the man's lips. Kakashi, no hesitation, returned the kiss. When a need for air presided, they broke apart. Kakashi cupped Iruka's face in his hands. "I love you," Kakashi whispered. "Don't ever think that I don't." "Kakashi... don't ever leave me. Please..." "I won't. Not if I can help it. Don't leave me, okay?" "Never." Iruka nestled against Kakashi's chest, falling into mercifully dreamless slumber. I have read that part probably 10 times now...please update soon, and I'm sure the next chapter will be even better, even though I'm not sure if that's possible...HAVE A HAPPY FRIDAY!!
| Reviewed By: PrincesaDeCisne7-13 On: March 03, 2006 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI!!! i didn't know you posted on mediaminer *shrugs* but this story is still awesome!!! and remeber the only reason "a certain reviewer" said those things is because he's just jealous!!!!! but keep on writing and update soon!!!
| Title: pixie
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 16:20 CST
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Wow, I'm impressed. Good story!
| Reviewed By: dk_joy not signed in On: February 06, 2006 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You really should update more often! I wanted to know what was going to happen to Iruka-sensei! *sniff* Poor Iruka! I hope they can get the antidote on time! I couldn't bear it if Iruka was killed off! Please keep going and update soon - don't leave us hanging!
| Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This fic rocks - please keep going! KakaIru is the best! Your version of Iruka is cool - he can cry one minute and throw himself in front of a kunai the next. But argh! They keep talking about the poison, but not doing anything about it! What's up with that? Please update as soon as you can!
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