| "Valentines" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: inuiskool[notloggedin] On: September 13, 2006 12:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
i wannt you to continue. I have a suggestion. make winry end something for ed, or come to see him.
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Title: Valentines
Reviewed By: animechick1 On: July 26, 2006 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story. It was fun to read. There weren't really any grammatical errors that i noticed, and even though it didn't have a specifically original plot, it had an original twist with the scene in Mustang's office. I really do hope you update soon, because i 'really' 'really' need to know what that letter says. I'LL DIE IF I DON'T KNOW!! Loving the mysterious ending. KUDOS TO YOU!!
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Reviewed By: dark_fire2009 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 17:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi i really like this story, can u plzzzzzzzzz update soon? *looking hopefully with teary eyes*
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Title: write plz
Reviewed By: IaMbOrEd On: February 04, 2006 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this its a good story so dont stop writing PULEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ
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Title: please continue
Reviewed By: full-blood-artist On: January 29, 2006 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i wanted to say that i love youre fanfic,you better continue it(just kidding:p) but please continue it im so curious about what going to happen..... (dont know how to spell it,sorry)Bold
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