| "The Wedding" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: vampirelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 13:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
i lkoke it i wana read what you update i never realy thought to put these to together but so far i like it!...there also both same of my fav hehe
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Reviewed By: mindfreak [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great idea, you just need to add more to it than what you have. I'll read what ever you update with. Just do do fast!
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
its okay but it was really shot so I cant tell how much I liked it but I would like to see where you go with it I love the sessXseph parring they are so hot together. Also I know that you said that they where going to be OOC but I think the whole daddy comment was a bit much. if you do want to add more to it. when sess and his dad are speaking in Japanese then have it in () or something like that so the reader can know what they are talking about. and just have a key at the beginning of a chapter.
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