Reviewed By: elfbane5 On: March 05, 2006 01:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this little one shot. The scenes were very well written and you get the sense of really being there. Your writing was so detailed, I could see it clearly in my mind. Their "moment" was very tasteful and still managed to be really hot! My only complaint was that the story was so short! I would have loved to read about everyones reacton at the Drama party! Oh, and I love the final line - you get to wear the dress, I laughed so hard because it had been such a serious moment, then BLAM! right out of the blue. Good job! Please consider continueing the story!
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