| "Shimmer" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Rueben On: May 03, 2004 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... just.. wow.
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Reviewed By: Shattered Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made me cry at the end...
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Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel On: April 03, 2003 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story! It was so good and you even mad me cry at the end. I love how you implied that he was kind of recarnated into someone else...sort of but it was like the other duo that everyone knows of. Well, I don't want to bore you with my little tidbits and all but I truly loved this story and will go with my little collection of the best fics I've ever read! It's not just best gundam wing fics but all fics! Great job and I'm going to see what other stories you have written...see if they measure up! I'll make sure to tell you too! |
Reviewed By: Mukuro [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 05:43 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm crying so much that... I can't even write this review... You killed Duo too far away from the end of the fic, this prolongs my tears...
The fic is great. I believe that nothing matters here, your story is so sad that in the end all people can think about is... whyyyyyy????
You could have wrote this like shit and the story would still be great. The plot is amazing...
Excellent job. |
Reviewed By: Loki Angel On: October 16, 2002 06:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoops. The rest of my review got choped... it was:
Eh. So sad... You wrote it very well though, and I wizzed through it easily. You've got a nice style, and I'm gonna look up your other fics. I just hope they aren't as depressing! ;) |
Reviewed By: Loki Angel On: October 16, 2002 06:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A kind of unhelpful rating, but I really did love this fic. I almost cried too! >_ |
Reviewed By: Cobalt1x2 On: April 12, 2002 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're style of writing was easy and fun to read.Some writers don't have good flow in their writing.Spelling seemed fine; I didn't notice any mistakes. Originality, I was really exctied about this one. Your fiction was quite different than most. Enjoyment..the only problem I had with your fiction was the ending because I didn't see the DEATH FICTION WARNING. ^^; My fault there so I'll give you 10's on everything. Write me a happy one, ah? |
Reviewed By: L-chan On: March 26, 2002 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave all 10 cuz i belive that this is a truelly great story.It fell like i could feel the emotions pouring out of the characters |
Reviewed By: Vanna Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2002 13:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is Beautiful. Simply gorgeous. The entire story is just a big ball of complex emotions and feelings. I loved it. |
Reviewed By: AllyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2002 11:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this. I'm not usually one cry, but I cried at this. It's so beautiful. You are a very talented writer. |
Reviewed By: dazzler On: February 24, 2002 09:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this yesterday, but couldn't review due to the fact that your fic made me cry! It was funny and sad, but I hoped what I expected to see happen when Duo found out about the bet not to happen. You stated that this was a cross-over fic Yu did it really well then,because I had no problem not knowing the characters like with other fics. Lastly, is there a site where I can see more of your fics,if so could you e-mail me at silverdust_sparkle@gundamwing.org |
Reviewed By: Duo_Maxwell_1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2002 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is SO beautiful! I love it! I almost cried, seriously and, for me, that's saying something. The only other fic that got me this depressed was Katsu no Miko's "In Sickness and In Health". If anyone out there has read that, you know what I'm talking about. |
