| "Life: Love, Marriage & Kids" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: Umm
Reviewed By: blue-roses234 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should update your story, or delete it. I, personally, enjoyed reading it. But there's no point in it being posted if you refuse to update it.
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 19:04 CST
Comment/Review:
hey! great so far! I'm only about half way through with the first chapter.. but I had to say something.. well.. AWESOME... but.. a few spelling and grammar mistakes.. you know me.. I'm annoyed by stupid sh*t. You might want to have someone *coughs* me *coughs* check it for you once before you post next chapter :-D xoxox no back to read the rest.. and so far looking forward to another chapter!
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