| "The Silence in a Smile" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: I Think that it was great
Reviewed By: allisonof3 On: June 28, 2006 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The reason thati have rated this a 10 is because i think that it was wonderful. Even though i did missed the part as to what Luffy was rubbing off thats ok. I think that they should write more on Luffy and Nami because they have alot on Zoro and Sanji i think that if they were going to write something about Luffy and Nami you couldn't do better.In all i want and i think that they should have more of Nami and Luffy that is what i want.
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Reviewed By: kc On: June 15, 2006 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! i loved this fic.
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Title: *disagrees w/ the previous*
Reviewed By: Osanagokorochi On: March 15, 2006 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although I TOTALLY disagree with the idiocy of the former comment, I have both favorable and unfavorable things to say about this fic. For one, it is not NEARLY so dull or--to quote from what little 'nothing special' submitted--'blech' as the other review claims, it is still a bit generic, but perfect for anyone who enjoys a bit of LxN fluff. There are only a couple elements that bother me--one in particular being the scrubbing scene; although Nami comes to realize the reason at the end, I missed it completely. Was that just me? Other than that, the characters were all kept relatively in-character, if not a little romanticized. All in all; it wasn't bad for a start. I can see you going places if you keep practicing. Gambate ne, --Koru-chan
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Title: ..nothing special
Reviewed By: unknown..idot On: March 05, 2006 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Blech
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