| "A Loveless Marraige" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: the evil fluffy muffin queen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 10:17 CDT
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this is awesome! couple of spelling and grammer mistakes, but its still awesome! i think you should make kouga get all mad and stuff and then he rapes her... or attempts... up to you. please update soon! ill send an email to you if i have to! i really love this fic!
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Reviewed By: B.B. On: January 12, 2007 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the last update was in febuary 2006. i think its time you updated this story. please, this story is realy good and i cant wait to read more. you are doing this story realisticaly and respectivly on the abuse part and i appreciate that because i lived in a household where there was abuse when i was very young, but i still remember things. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!
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Title: o.o
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON i need to know what happends next (i love the story its self so original ive never read any like it which says allot because i have been reading storys here for got i dont even know how many years xD so please update soon allways watching BethieK.
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Reviewed By: Easton On: June 26, 2006 01:26 CDT
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UPDATE!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!! Like tomorrow maybe (thats probably wishful thinking) but update soo cause this story is good
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Title: WRITE MORE!!!!
Reviewed By: Kawii-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 06:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEAZ WRITE MORE I WANT TO KNO WUTS GUNNA HAPPEN!!!! KEEP UP THE GUD WORK =D
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Reviewed By: EbonyQueen2015 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 18:21 CST
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Title: OMV PLZ KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: mae_may On: February 18, 2006 18:36 CST
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lol i dont need ta rate ya cuz itz rely guddd:P plz keep writing cuz i luv it:D lolness plzplzplplzplzplzpllzplzpolz or i'lll shoot uuuu.........jks!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_cute_doggy_ears (not signed in) On: February 17, 2006 21:51 CST
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Yay! i was checking my email for updations (ha ha i just made a new word ... i think) and you had updated! i love this story and it is really good! when is inuyasha and kagome gonna get together? oOoOoOoOo, is inuyasha gonna save kagome from the wrath of koga? lol. you probably don't understand this but i can sum it all up for you in one word: update!
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Reviewed By: kag&inu On: February 04, 2006 14:59 CST
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Grrrrr! Kagome should leave Koga! He's mean! lol anyway, this shows to be a great story so please continue as i will be wating for your next update. please make it soon! : )
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 11:06 CST
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great story bad spelling... he was slepping on the coach? i think you meant the couch but any way! i love your story
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: inuyasha_cute_doggy_ears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Update soon!!! LOVE the story so far. : )
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Title: A Loveless Marraige
Reviewed By: crazy144 On: February 02, 2006 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok plz im begging u i need to read more hheheheh update
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 07:18 CST
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Very interesting story-line so far, I wanna see what else ya do ^-^
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