Reviewed By: Schmlei On: February 07, 2006 21:40 CST Comment/Review: Sorry, I couldn't get past the summary. Or title for that matter. But I just had to comment anyway. Hyuga...Hiei? And how dare you presume to say he is CANON when any Narutard worth his or her salt knows there is no such character? I am rather affronted here, if you couldn't tell. I don't care what kind of Gary Stu/Mary Sue thing you do, but do not try to defile the genius that is Kishimoto-sensei by making it seem like this OC actually exists in the continuum. I don't ask for much--simply change your summary so it isn't quite so... blatantly idiotic and damn close to infringing on a copyright.
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