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| "Poupuru Koukon" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Watch For Stars* On: April 13, 2006 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*reads again* YAY! AWESOME! *kicks you* WHY ISN'T THERE MORE?! lol Yep, still love it! Akuma is the BEST name for Liliha's sword! As usual, you are showered with my love. lol Hugs! Luv ya lots! Now I'm gonna read that Miles "Foxy" update! WOOTAGAIN!
| Title: Chapter 3... the end to another awesome story!!
Reviewed By: fairy-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 07:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY FOR YIFFYONE!!!! You say that you're proud of this and you should be! This last chapter was a brilliant end to a brilliant story! The drama, the action, the emotion, I loved it all! You truly are an amazing writer Yiffy, you bring characters to life with your words! This is without a doubt one of the best original fanfics I've ever read! The way Liliha felt when she realised that one of her one of her long lost family had survived was really moving, and the flashback to how she fought the dragon demon for the cursed blade, Akuma, was fantastic!! Dragons! Cursed swords! It's a fantasy lover's paradise! ^_^ Plus I really love how you used all the Japanese words in this story to make it sound authentic! I love the Japanese culture, it's one of the reasons I'm such a big anime and manga fan! All in all, it was excellent and I loved it, so thank you for posting such an awesome fic on this site for us to read! Keep up the great work! P.S The drawing you did of Liliha is sooooooooooo cool! You're a great artist Yiff! ~_^
| Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: fairy-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 07:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, I just realised that I spelt Liliha's name wrong in my first review... Sorry about that! Typing isn't one of my strongest abilities lol. Anyway, awesome second chapter! I loved the way the second part of the chapter was from Liliha's point of view, it really helped me to understand her character more and to see how she was feeling. This OC has a really interesting personality; I can't help but feel sorry for her though. She seems to have experienced a lot of pain in the past... But I still like her a lot! I love the way she was with the cat boy that was following her, that made me grin when she called him handsome lol! Awww, Taku's really cute when he's acting all scared of her! And now you've got me curious as to what exactly Liliha's hiding under that long sleeve of hers… Ooooh, the suspense! And I see that Eggman is the one she wants to kill. Well, I can't say I blame her; he's such an evil moron! Aw, this really is such a great story; I can't believe that you haven't had more reviews for it. It's AWESOME! And so are you! ~_^
| Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: fairy-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 06:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... That's all I can say, WOW!! This story is unbelievably amazing! This is the first time that I've ever read a Japanese style samurai fanfic I LOVED IT!!! This first chapter was completely captivating, after the first few paragraphs I was totally hooked! I'm serious! The wording was beautiful, as it is in all your stories, and the story line has so much depth that just had to continue! You've once again managed to write your OC perfectly, going into enough detail to keep my interest even though I knew nothing about her before today! Liliah is awesome by the way! You, Watch For Stars, and Love Shadow 14 did an excellent job in creating her - she's soooooooooo cool! ^_^ The action scene when she fought and killed all the ninjas was superbly written! I've said it once and I'll say it again, your action scenes never cease to amaze me lol! I felt like I was watching a film, I could imagine it all perfectly! Hmmmm... Now I wonder what will happen to the young boy now that he's following her. This is getting exciting! Ok, I'm going to read the next chapter now! Great work Yiffy!
| Title: You know why I'm panicked right now...
Reviewed By: Watch For Stars (lazy and panicked) On: February 16, 2006 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE! Holy crap! You've really got Liliha's persona down pat! Poor Taku! He was scared to death when Liliha "attacked" him! Lol Nice job, seriously! You MUST continue! You must! Please? Pwetty pweese? *puppy dog eyes* Pweeeeeeeese!? Ok, Seriously, this is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Completely and Utterly fantastic from the beginning to the end! Congrats, on yet another, wonderfully tremendous story!
| Reviewed By: Watch For Stars [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naturally I'm going to rate you all 10s becuase I own 1/3 of the character, but yeah. You're an awesome writer anyway! lol Can't wait to read more, and I'm hoping you ask Amy and me for extra info on her! We love ya, and you know we'll help! lol Fantastic job portaying her and drawing her! ~_^ Keep it up!
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