| "Travelers' Return" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: souichirobaeza [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story you have, i cant wait for the next chapter you release....im looking forward to it...till then Ja ne SouichiBaeza
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Reviewed By: Uknown On: May 21, 2007 07:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is possibly one of the greatest Ranma Fanfiction out there the story and plot are original theres a flawless crossover and introduction of the other series and I can't wait to see hwo the rest of the story turns out, Keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: 117 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 10:43 CDT
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Your story is good. The part I'm waiting in anticipation of is the inevitable showdown between Beryl and Ranma.
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Reviewed By: FalseExact [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite stories found on mediaminer and I can't wait to see what happens in Further chapters please get more chapters out soon
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Title: Very nice
Reviewed By: xeromercy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story with a very nice breath of characters. Please keep up the great story.
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Reviewed By: Rionach On: February 08, 2007 16:22 CST
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Found your story today again and read it and love the last new chapters, only the one for the last was a bit an odd jumping from one thing to another.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 02:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. The story is getting better and better. You have a great imagination. Iwant more.
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 00:44 CST
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Very interesting story, although I agree with some other people. The story of the trip would probably be even more interesting, not to mention truely worthy of the Hentai catagory. Despite all the sexual refrences and past acts, this is pretty tame for a Ranama harem like fic. The plot is finaly moving in these later chapters, and the story hasn't been abondond like so many others here at mediaminer. I can't wait till the next update. Btw, last two chapters have had format issues, with webpage comands scattered threw out them. Making it a little harder to read.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 08:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent new chapter. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Regal On: January 14, 2007 04:58 CST
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16000+ visits! Wow! Your stories sure draw an audience! Please continue! At least the JadedRanmaFan was not here.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 07:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update. I love the new chapters. The story is getting better and better. Can't wait to see Cologne DIE, DIE, DIE. And please, don't have Nabiki cure Ryoga of his curses. She should continue humiliating both him and Akane and find a way for the two to marry and be miserable together for the rest of their lives.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A lot of original ideas (in my opinion). I can't wait for an update.
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Reviewed By: RocsFlight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 21:27 CST
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"couple of semester, at" >>> "couple of semesters, at" "So have a mage" >>> "So we have a mage" "recapped, "Want to">>> "recapped, "who want to"
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 03:19 CST
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great chapter, but it would be really cool if you wrote stories about what happened to ranma and nabiki in their journey/ training trip. well this armour of light sounds like the wings of the light hawk from tenchi muyo.....very similar. well hope for some more chapters soon, this is getting very interesting and i can't wait for the reunion of ranma and cologne.
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