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Reviewed By: angeltsuki (not logged in) On: July 13, 2006 15:02 CDT Comment/Review: YAY X3 It's a cool fight^^
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Reviewed By: critical eye [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 16:55 CDT Comment/Review: Not bad but there are also some things I don´t like. First why would the human hating Sesshoumaru mate with his human ward who he raised all on his own? OOC! It´s like Kagome mating with Shippo! I just hate the usual pairings, it shows absolutely no originality. And your own character is to perfect- sreams like Mary Sue! Youko is also OOC, he is a cold, murdering thief despite how many authors here on MM describe him otherwise just to fit him better in their idiotic fics. Sorry but it´s just too hard to find a really good crossover with IY/YYH were the characters are everything but not what they really are.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 10:56 CDT Comment/Review: Yay =3 Things are starting to heat up^^ Plz update asap
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea (not logged in) On: June 09, 2006 01:54 CDT Comment/Review: very nice chapter. plz update soon !! ^^
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 17:38 CDT Comment/Review: YAY^^ I love it =3 you know what to do.... update :)
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki (not logged on) On: May 25, 2006 15:36 CDT Comment/Review: Who is he!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? Plz update and stop leaving us in the dark *puppy eyes with a puppy pout*
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 18:51 CDT Comment/Review: awsome story, please update soon!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 20:05 CDT Comment/Review: Oh oh oh!!!! Is Tsume her former mate!? PLZ continue I love it^^
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 17:01 CDT Comment/Review: lmao this is rich :3 Plz continue.
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Reviewed By: yay4air (not logged in) On: April 24, 2006 16:45 CDT Comment/Review: i love it!! Youko seems a bit obsessed though. But you did a very good job with keeping inuyasha in the story, especially with kagome. most fics just cast inuyasha out of kagomes life. anywayz awsome story, please update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 22:49 CDT Comment/Review: LMAO
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 23:13 CDT Comment/Review: I Would like you to continue doing this. It is interesting how Youko is fixated her, even if Selena is a little too perfect at everything,
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Reviewed By: spitfire17268 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 09:25 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOVE your story. My favorite part is Youko being out-witted and denied by Selena. Please, PLEASE update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 15:48 CST Comment/Review: I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 15:41 CST Comment/Review: I really love it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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