"Eternal Series" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Ryn-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 22:43 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I love it, I love it, I love it. You must write more, I'll positively die if you don't. Please? With sugar and cherries on top? Please? |
Reviewed By: Dreamweaver On: October 19, 2002 21:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like this fic. I want more!
Taken apart, into individual elements, there've been stories about vamps, demons, G-pilots with supernatural abilites, but this is the first time they've been put together in this fashion.
The storyline is different enough that I'd call it a fairly original fic.
I just hope the margins are set up so I can print it out and plant holes in it to fit my binder of GW fics. |
Reviewed By: Terra Skye On: August 16, 2002 04:44 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm now absolutely dying to know about what kind of relationship Wufei had with Duo... and how Heero will react if he finds out... will he??? |
Reviewed By: raven On: June 19, 2002 11:28 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I hope you write more i highly enjoyed what i read. You write very well. You are better than most of the authors i have read. Thank you for writing a wonderful series and i hope it continues. |
Reviewed By: raven On: June 19, 2002 11:26 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: let me just say, wow! That is...extremely interesting. This is definitely next in line for favorites. i want to see more. I want to know what these images are . Please write more. Your creativity adds so much. |
Reviewed By: raven On: June 19, 2002 11:08 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This one was definitely different, but i like it. Its interesting how they act around ecah other and the odd memoies thst Duo starts to recieve. |
Reviewed By: Raven On: June 19, 2002 10:52 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is by far my favorite chapter thus far. I love the way you completed the transition from the last chapter. You are great. I love ya. Your understanding of duo and heero is deep and perfect and wonderful. I want to read more stuff like this. Please keep writing. |
Reviewed By: raven On: June 19, 2002 10:40 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved the way you worked this chapter out. It was ....inticing. I was glued to the screen and definitely enjoyed the tifts between duo and heero. you are doing an excellent job and i cant wait to read the rest of the series. |
Reviewed By: raven On: June 19, 2002 10:24 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: This chapter got better towards the end but the start of it wasnt grabbing. It just kept you wondering, will it get better as you go along or shall i stop reading. But i read on and i enjoyed it because the style of his thoughts coincided with the first chapters. It was a very good ending. |
Reviewed By: Raven On: June 19, 2002 10:14 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: The chapter grabbed me, it held onto me and drew me in. You did an excellent job. I want to see so much more from you. I love the idea behind this chapter and the beginning was perfect. Great job. Keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Megami Riley On: May 24, 2002 20:47 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This series was great! I can'r wait till you put more of them up. I like the originality for the story. |
Reviewed By: Dewshine On: April 10, 2002 20:57 CDT Comment/Review: Oh.. me like, me like very much. Please continue! I definately like how you have Heero's character. Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Dewshine On: March 29, 2002 11:50 CST Comment/Review: Cool. I like it. Please write more soon, ok?
Also, I like your style of writing. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Evie On: February 24, 2002 10:52 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: These one-shots are wonderful! I love your style of writing. Please keep going!! |