| "When Will You Return To Me? (Continuation to the Power of Ai" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Nyuka
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you sooooooooooooo much im glad i got to fill in the gap :) im glad that every thing turns out all right :)
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Title: Nyuka
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i was in a panic when i wrote that late staitment and i had just finished reading chaper 9 and chaper 10 wasn't there i still want to read about chaper 10 if it gets fix plus i would be so cool if you wrote more about how kogome does in school i mean she has to be like at least 20yrs now and i dont know if 20yrs olds go to high school i think they go to night school... i dont know... i sill love you work and i look forward to reading more...:)
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Title: Nyuka
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story I cant stop reading it I cant belive that 9 and 10 are the same it destrubes the story whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! I have to read I have to see how it works out i feel like some thing is missing you have to fix it you must write more it just to much i love this story good job on it im going to hope for revisions and look for more of you work :) also on another of the chapers the chaper is writen twice just thought i would let you know. i love this fic. :) keep writing you are good... :) people should be writing more review in no time it is realy good... well at least i think so that is some thing right... :) Im going to look forward to your work.
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: May 24, 2007 20:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ineteresting story. I noticed that chapter 9 and chapter 10 are exactly the same. Could you try to fix that please?
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