"Broken Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 15:54 EST Comment/Review: awwwwwww eaten by a random youkai, poor kouga, if only for that...anyways OMG I LOVE IT...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: mspickalo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 09:30 EST Comment/Review: that was awsome i spent days reading it cause i work alot so almost all of my free time was reading this fanfic it was that good i do hope that sooner or later you might do a sequel but all around that was an awsome fic and would be happy even if you left it the way you did.
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 01:26 EDT Comment/Review: Great story though i must ask. Are Sango and Miru still waiting in the village as they were told to??
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Title: something special Reviewed By: inu-dums*** On: September 13, 2006 01:50 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: okay so there was a sequal but i didnt see it at the end.good fic
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Title: nice Reviewed By: inu-dums*** On: September 13, 2006 00:51 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is my favorite fanfic on this site.well one of my favorites.why dot you add some things after the epilouge? maybe you should add some sesshoumaru and maybe some rin!not that i like them ,its just that they didnt show up so i guess that you hate them.well you should add more chaps or maybe a new story continuing this!it might be fun and it might be in lemons!XD XD XD XD XD XD XD.that might be a way to get more people to read.i dont like lemons its just that they have a rush to them.OK maybe i said to much.well it was a great fic
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Reviewed By: Miryokuteki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 16:43 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was a really cool story. just one question... what happened to Sango, Miroku, and Shippo? Well, maybe you'll explain that in the sequel. Honestly, I thought you kept everyone pretty in character. Even Kouga. Everything you had happen had a solid reason behind it which is what I look for in fics that deviate from the original story line like this one did. Like I don't read many Sess/Kag fics because few people have been able to make it make sense. You did a good job creating solid foundations for your character's emotions and actions. I can't wait to read more of your work.
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Reviewed By: birdman45 On: March 07, 2006 23:30 EST Comment/Review: I think I know the reason why Kouga doesn't use his sword in the show. I read someone's suggestion to a question someone asked and they thought it might be like his anckur (I think that's how its spelled) to hold him in his humanoid form.
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