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Title: Bds13
Reviewed By: Bds13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 20:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to know. For chapter 30, wasn't the Kongosoha called the addament barrage in the anime series?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 15:39 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... enjoyed reading it... glad that even with all the bad things that happened it was a happy ending in the end... good job... great work...
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: DevilsSin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 23:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eye twitches* HOLY CRAP THAT'S A GOOD FANFIC XD I've been reading it for the passed two hours :) I really really really really really really really like ittttt :) I won't lie when I say I love Sesshy and Kag together more but this is my second fave couple and it's really hard to find a good Inu and Kags fanfic that doesn't share the same story line. Anyways like I said earlier... I really like it! It's very original and I liked the whole "Youkai" part alot.. even though I love Kouga too, he needs to keep dreaming hehe ... Why did Naraku have to touch those adorable ears thoughhhhh :( It's like.. cute fuzzy ears! Naraku is truly evil! :( Hehe anyways, I'm done with my pointless rambling.. So when's that sequel gna come out ehhh? :) Can't wait!!! Anyways, Love always, Stephy-chan xoxo
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
just a few things I wanted to mention. first, I liked this story - it was a little too dark for me and several times i found i had to stop reading for a moment or skip over sections entirely. I am not one for gore - inuyasha's torture was really too much for me. the only other thing with which i had a problem was the editing. it had major grammer and spelling errors, making it difficult to understand in several spots. other than that your story was good and pretty well thought out and executed. oh and as for those flames - absolutley and completely ignore them. there are ridiculus and obviously childish insults thrown out to draw attention to the flamer. you said several times that all of your characters were somewhat oc (although im not so sure i agree about that - maybe with koga, but thats it. people (and hanyous too) change with every event that happens in their lives, especially if that event is major and in someway traumatic, so to think that after lost memories, torture and near death that inuyasha would be the same abrasive, loud, sometimes unthinking hanyou that we all know and love from the show is idiotic. with time and certain events people change, meaning that how they behave is different from how they BEHAVED, afterwards. and you made it very clear that time and events had indeed occured that would change them - all of them - from the characters represented on the show (which is what you started with)). hmm... it seems to me that i may have just repeated the smae point about three different times there. but i was really irritated by such stupid things as that - especially with all the other fics out there that are so utterly and completly oc and they get no flames saying anything. and you said at the very start that there was going to be oc. and i agree with your logic that although most of us like to beleive koga isn't the bad guy he appeared to be in this fic, that he certainly started out that way, and had the personality for it. I personally am one of the ones that dont think that koga - were he an actual living being(another thing that irritated me about your flames - my god, people it is a STORY! based on fictional characters! IT IS NOT REAL! lighten up) - would do anything like that, if you allow yourself a little bending room in your veiws of people (as, at least in real life, they often can surprise you, no matter what you thought they were or weren't capable of) or characters, then you can usually enjoy a good fan fiction such as this one. ok, i think im done ranting now. sorry about that, but just thought that i should let you know you have my support against those flamers. adn anyways, i figure and extra long review ought to help make up for the lack of ones on here (mediaminer.org), so cheers :)
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Title: JUST FOUND THIS
Reviewed By: Charmander [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 11:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I AM SUPRISED THAT YOU HAVE SO LITTLE REVIEWS!!!!!!! THIS STORY IS EXCELLENT. NOT ONLY THAT, IT'S ALSO CREATIVE. I ENJOYED THIS FIC
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 19:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you made the right descion about making Raijin into a human. I think he can find his own peace best that way, since he was no longer just Naraku's creation. Defeating Naraku was likely to cause casualties so it made it more realistic. I loved this story. Thank you for posting it.
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Title: HOORAH
Reviewed By: angelofscreams96 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 21:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read the whole story...AND I LOVE IT SO MUCH. Thank you for posting it on mediaminer!!!! I'll start on whatever else i can find written by you tomorrow lol. I havew work to do right now. And given the circumstances that the characters were placed in, they didn't really seem OOC at all to me...but maybe I'm just to tired to notice lol. Great job on writing this and good luck in the future. =)
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 00:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still bumbed you only have 7 reviews...Such a shame. It's a great story and yes I look forward to your sequal. Chanda
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 15:54 EST
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awwwwwww eaten by a random youkai, poor kouga, if only for that...anyways OMG I LOVE IT...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: mspickalo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 09:30 EST
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that was awsome i spent days reading it cause i work alot so almost all of my free time was reading this fanfic it was that good i do hope that sooner or later you might do a sequel but all around that was an awsome fic and would be happy even if you left it the way you did.
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 01:26 EDT
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Great story though i must ask. Are Sango and Miru still waiting in the village as they were told to??
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Title: something special
Reviewed By: inu-dums*** On: September 13, 2006 01:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay so there was a sequal but i didnt see it at the end.good fic
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: inu-dums*** On: September 13, 2006 00:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is my favorite fanfic on this site.well one of my favorites.why dot you add some things after the epilouge? maybe you should add some sesshoumaru and maybe some rin!not that i like them ,its just that they didnt show up so i guess that you hate them.well you should add more chaps or maybe a new story continuing this!it might be fun and it might be in lemons!XD XD XD XD XD XD XD.that might be a way to get more people to read.i dont like lemons its just that they have a rush to them.OK maybe i said to much.well it was a great fic
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Reviewed By: Miryokuteki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 16:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a really cool story. just one question... what happened to Sango, Miroku, and Shippo? Well, maybe you'll explain that in the sequel. Honestly, I thought you kept everyone pretty in character. Even Kouga. Everything you had happen had a solid reason behind it which is what I look for in fics that deviate from the original story line like this one did. Like I don't read many Sess/Kag fics because few people have been able to make it make sense. You did a good job creating solid foundations for your character's emotions and actions. I can't wait to read more of your work.
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Reviewed By: birdman45 On: March 07, 2006 23:30 EST
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I think I know the reason why Kouga doesn't use his sword in the show. I read someone's suggestion to a question someone asked and they thought it might be like his anckur (I think that's how its spelled) to hold him in his humanoid form.
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