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| "Tales of Symphonia: The Swordsman and the Summoner" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Please keep on writing
Reviewed By: BerserkRonin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story, the whole collette hat thing kinda confused me, but over all I can tell you are an exceptional writer, please keep on going, I want to see how this story turns out.
| Title: Not big on Sheelloyd/Big on Sheelos
Reviewed By: I love Sheelos On: March 25, 2006 10:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very well written, but i go by the Canon and Sheelos, so that was why i did'nt like it more. Not biggie and i'm not dissing you, but i personally think sheelloyd sucks.
| Reviewed By: Zelos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very great Story. Read up to Chapter 10 and enjoyed it very much. Your style is good and you really have the background of ToS gotten into your story. I like the way the characters behave. It´s just the way I would have put it, with the notable difference that I´m not as good in creative writing than you are. I personally am a fan of Sheena and Zelos (not as couple, both as Lloyd´s friends). I like the acting of Zelos and I like how the situation is getting between Lloyd and Sheena and the twisted feeling within Colette. I think you´ve done great work and I hope you will continue to write. (Don´t blame me for any writing or grammar mistake, I´m a German, searching for fanfics about ToS. Really great game.)
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