| "Escape" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: AmeMaru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely dispise pairing Treize with anyone, but if you keep up like this I just may change my mind. I would love to read the rest if you will post it!
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Reviewed By: Ailanthus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the beginning of this, it has great potential. I was only horrified to notice that there weren't any more chapters. :3 Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: tangerinespeedo On: June 28, 2006 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like how you started the story- it really pulls you in. i see a lot of potential in it so i do hope you continue with this fic. thanks for sharing and please update soon. =)
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Reviewed By: Ozdragoness On: March 06, 2006 05:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome! I don't come on often and wasn't expecting very much, since all of the Kingdom Hearts I looked at were majority appearing Mary Sue's or Rip-Offs (No offense to the writers, my personal opinion) Update soon! Pleeeease?
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: February 05, 2006 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an awesome begining! I can't wait to see what happens between them next. One thing though, I don't know if it was the way you typed it or it was when you put it on mediaminer.org, but can you put some spaces in between your paragraphs? It makes it much easier for people to read, but I still love your story! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: lo On: February 05, 2006 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tease, that was great!!! I love 5X13 fiction. This already has a great begining, and I can't wait to see where you take this great story. Maybe you go into the destruction of the lab and the people whom run it. I love revenge stories. Anyway it is yours and you are doing a wonderful job. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: SK On: February 05, 2006 05:21 CST
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Interesting start. It's too soon to tell how this fic will turn out, so hopefully the next chapter will reveal more of this premise. In the meantime, I'll be waiting for more. Keep it up!
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