| "Gundares: The Destined Warriors" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Butterfly Kisses [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2002 15:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
If you don't hurray up and put up the next chappy, then I promise you that I wont talk to you at school any more until you do!! So there!!
~B.K.~ |
Reviewed By: Heather M...aka: Xangfei On: May 31, 2002 13:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Really Good. Please put of chapter 5 soon!!
byes |
Reviewed By: LightPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2002 14:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this story very much. Please continue |
Reviewed By: Kita On: April 04, 2002 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kays, I liked the chapter and all, but you should send this to your editor before posting so she can fix your mistakes for you. Do you remember who your editor is though????I would like to be able to fix your mistakes, but you keep forgeting. Wouldn't you like to have a straight 10 all down the board????????????O_~ |
