| "This Was Never Meant To Be" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2002 18:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is cute! ^_^ Loved the breakfast scene. *smile* Hope you hurry out with the next chapter.
~Dipity |
Reviewed By: Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2002 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehe... bitch fight. |
Reviewed By: Keruseyu_sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2002 17:15 CST
Comment/Review:
luv ur story, plz continue!!!! |
Reviewed By: Pickle [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2002 13:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well its good so far, pan is a bit to aggresive, but its preaty good |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 13, 2002 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! Can't wait to read more. I thought Krillin was Goku's best friend? But it's is your story so it's okay with me. |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2002 06:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL that was funny.GO PAN KICK MARRON'S ASS.the dumb blond that she is.
great fic need more ASAP,
:)mizu:P |
