| "After the Lunar Flower" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: red haired demon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome please update soon!!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Kimika On: December 31, 2006 17:45 CST
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I love the story so far love the third chapter its my favorite so far. I loved the ending it was awesome fluff. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Mrs Cake (Not logged in) On: November 28, 2006 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must be a horrible reviewer. I can't find any misttakes but i'm still asking you to write more. I wouldn't be saying this if it weren't true, your an awesome writer!!! Please... PLEASE!!! Continue on with this story. I love it. Mrs Cake~
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most awsome. I really love your story so far. I'm looking forward to your next update to this. I like the good crossovers and yours is looking splendid so far. Stay encouraged to write.
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Reviewed By: bluemoon_175 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please you must write more, I have never been more excited to wait for an update. Plus this story is keeping me on my toes, I hope you keep up the job well done. Also this story sounds fantastic, so PLEASE UPDATE as SOON as you can.
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Reviewed By: VolcainoKitsune On: August 20, 2006 15:59 CDT
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hmmm interesting, never thought of this idea to combine a crossover. Kiba is becoming a little OOC, and it seems that the relationship is moving a little fast.see if you can slow it down some.
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Reviewed By: numanumayay On: August 15, 2006 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!!!! Update soon please!! Please Please Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 01:20 CDT
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OMG I LUV IT SO FAR EVEN THOUGH ITS SOOOOOOO SAD!!! PLSE CONTINUE
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Reviewed By: bmk On: July 21, 2006 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it it was great cant wait for the next chapters
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Title: Moooore! ;-;
Reviewed By: Lilium On: April 02, 2006 12:33 CDT
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Please write more chapters! PLEEEEEASE!!?? ;-;
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Reviewed By: lawngnome05 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i know everyone is saying that things are going too fast for kagome and kiba but personally i think you have to consider the fact that kiba is a WOLF. animal instincs and all that would have heated that kiss up no matter how close he was with cheza, he's an animal and a female advance would be hard for him to resist. i do agree that kagome should move a little slower but then she too would have a hard time, think about it here's a guy that she is acually attracted too (unlike kouga) who is declaring his dedication to her and wants her as well, not as a replacement. Because no matter how close kiba was with cheza i don't think he could ever treat her like inuyasha did. so i don't think that kiss really did any harm too anything. and the like he said in the last chapter "Thats why, as a wolf, he tried to never let people too close. Even Cheza had not been in his heart. He had cared for her, but he kept something of himself back. Kagome had not done that. And now it was tearing her apart." he held back some, but i don't think he could this time.
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Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 23:36 CST
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HMMMM, the only problem I have with your story or the writing of the story is the same thing the others pointed out and that is that Kiba and Kagome are comming together way too quickly. I feel the same as Fullmetal_Alchemist, Kiba was very emotionally attached to Cheza and Kagome to InuYasha so I don't think that it would be so easy for them to realize an attraction. I definately think that Kagome would push away from a kiss from anyone regardless of pain, exhaustion, or any other reason. I do , tho, see how they would be attracted to each other and think that it's very feasable that they could eventually get together, just not so quickly. The story is flowing well so far; I like the way you introduced Sesshomaru, it's good to go back to the IY part of this story, I'd like to see that develope further...I can't wait to read more.
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Title: Crits? Alright o.x;
Reviewed By: Fullmetal_Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 15:22 CST
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Alright. Here are some Crits: Kagome and Kiba hit it off to quickly. Kiba would have still been a bit depressed about Cheza, ne? and Kagome would have tried to avoid this kind of thing for a little while longer, she just lost Inuyasha, member? And what about when (or if) she gets to Paradise and wishes for her Freiend's return? She would have to choose between Inuyasha or Kiba, and i soubt she could do that. ^^; Other than that, i absolutely loved this chapter, ne, this entire story! I am begging you to write the next chapter! Im dying to read it *dies*
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Reviewed By: Mrs cake On: March 05, 2006 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Squeal* i loved it! he he Kiba is bein' a little kinky! woah never expected that but i love it! you rock! please update!!!! Mrs cake.
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Title: chap 3
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is very compelling, and i hope to read more of it soon. please update soon
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