"After the Lunar Flower" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Title: Bold Reviewed By: Angeleye21 On: February 24, 2006 15:14 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ok I tell you what I think you do wrong ^^( Evil Grin ) I Think that you let Kiba fall in Love with Kagome to fast ^^Come on I Love Kagome/Kiba Fics but Cheza had just died and pop Kagome comes in the Picture and Kiba falls hat over heels for her in such a short time? Come now everybody ho knows the Anime knows that Kiba and Cheza had a very deebly bond and its inpossibly for Kiba to fall for kagome this fast ^^Its not that I don`t like that it gos fast ( I often can´t wait till the Kiss >.< ) but its an little unbelivabel ^^ so oh and I Love this Fic and hope you don´t let us wait to long till next Chapter^^ So keep up the good work and update soon
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Title: UPDATE SOON!!! Reviewed By: moosegirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 21:44 CST Comment/Review: Hey. Awesome third chapter... I love the fluff. When will there be a lemon? I found a couple grammatical errors, but nothing really to worry about (I suck a grammar). I have a question: in the beginning of the chapter, that was the battle before Kagome met up with the WR gang? Anyhoo, I gave you a ten because I loved the chapter so much. Despite what you say, you're a very good writer already. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 20:20 CST Comment/Review: DUDE!!! This is a AWSUM! Story!!! I LOVE IT! XD I cant wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: shashi1015 On: February 23, 2006 19:33 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: great story write more
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Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 00:38 CST Comment/Review: Good so far...these are two of my favorite anime shows, great to read about the characters fussed together in one story!!!
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: February 14, 2006 21:31 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved it!!!!! Hope you update soon. Please, please do so soon...
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 18:25 CST Comment/Review: Please update soon! I want to know what happends next!
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Title: Update soon Reviewed By: moosegirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 16:18 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please (x's 100000) update soon. I love this story and want you to continue. You're doing an excellent job. Keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 15:17 CST Comment/Review: another great chapter, i can't wait for more please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: ShihanKitsune(NOt logged in) On: February 12, 2006 11:59 CST Comment/Review: Very nice writing style and very satisfying. Overall this is a great story and please update.
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Title: GOOD NOW UPDATE Reviewed By: Jasmin A.K.A Kiba_Girl1400 On: February 11, 2006 20:36 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: NO THAT YOU HAVE AN REVIEW UPDATE ALREADY (composes self). Well i really like your story and i hope you update soon. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: freakhorrorchick [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 18:19 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 16:01 CST Comment/Review: uh! Cool, cool! I can't wait to know what happends next!
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Reviewed By: Umbiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 07:33 CST Comment/Review: This is really good so far. I haven't seen a lot of Wolf's Rain/InuYasha crossovers worth reading. That and tey like, never update ever. Lol. I hope to be reading more soon. Later!
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 18:38 CST Comment/Review: great start this sounds like it will be interesting there are very few good inu/wr xovers. please keep updating, i can't wait for more.
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