| "Misao and Hiko's encounter" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: _luv_naraku_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 13:26 CST
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i still think it would be rape.
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Title: WoW
Reviewed By: Kanna De Toro On: August 11, 2005 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!.... Lol I do say that this was such a story. Never have I come across this pairing. How original. I do think though that you did rush a bit. There could be more of a story to the begining. But other wise hehe made me smirk.
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Reviewed By: Isuzu Emi On: April 21, 2005 11:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you've pulled off a complete piece of comedy genius. This one is less offensive than the Faye/Vicious one, but again with the cumming in the face? Enough of that already! - "like his sword technique" - best line. Overall 10, simply because I haven't laughed this hard in weeks. I'm not trying to be insulting but this stuff is sooo graphic i really can't help it: all you're missing is the 70s prono jazz... Sidenote: penises go flaccid after ejaculation.
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Title: hirose_sama@yahoo.de
Reviewed By: weltunter On: April 08, 2005 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, if Seijûro Hiko were to read this, he'd behead you. This guy would *never* rape someone. I see him as someone who is quite fierce and maybe even rough with his lovers. But he'd never let himself down to such a tacky thing. He has style. He is an overly arrogant asshole because he IS good at everything he does! Do you really believe that something as cheap as rape would come to his mind? All this left aside your fic still was not good in any way. It was too short, there was no tension, your writing lacks severely. Besides this something happened to the format... I have read another Hiko/Misao fic that at least was reasonable. You could have explained why Misao was paying Hiko a visit and since when she got the hots for him. I really appreciate the idea of a rough and steamy smut fic. But let it at least have some kind of sense, even if it is absolutely out of character for someone like Seijûro Hiko.
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Reviewed By: Mermaid Ninja On: February 18, 2004 19:23 CST
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I don't think Hiko is the perv type. Shouldn't Misao have been able to defend herself?
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Title: gabyhyatt
Reviewed By: gabyhyatt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 22:19 CST
Comment/Review:
great lemon
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Reviewed By: GitonaX [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 17:19 CST
Comment/Review:
..ahem...ummmm....WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT SH**!(its was alright I have seen worse)
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Title: ..................a huh......
Reviewed By: Skibz On: December 14, 2003 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok so as far as spelling and grammar go, i don't think you spelled anything wrong, but i wasn't really looking for you to either, but as for the style of writing, it was ok, but as far as the sex scene goes, well the terms are a bit to textbook for me, not that i want any "pulsaiting member" shit, but, well lets just say your fic made me cringe a bit at the language, For originality and creativity, i give you a 10! I have NEVER read a fic with this pairing before, i truely liked it and thought it was a good change of pace from the normal MA's out there. Enjoyment factor, well i'd have to say i enjoyed the fic, not the best i've read, but DEFINETLY not the worst. Keep up the good writing and i hope to read another story by you soon!! >.
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Title: good
Reviewed By: Kanzen Nehan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 20:20 CST
Comment/Review:
It was short but I think it was good. Great job. Anything with Misao is an instant sex appeal. YAY MISAO. And Hiko is kick!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lord Gackt [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 11:32 CDT
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Probably one of the worst stories I've read in a while, but as for the critics who are completely over bashing the situation, let's all take some time out to remember that this is "make believe" written by amateurs, who can write just about whaever they damn well please. I just would hope it'd be done with creativity which this fic lacks.
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Reviewed By: Sake [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 14:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
.......... thats all i have to say
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Reviewed By: Clemen4daworld On: September 20, 2003 22:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Umm well it rush, you could of put more effort into it but hey it just fanfiction. It preety funny actually if people take this seriously dont you think after all it just fanfiction right. Until next time take care. |
Reviewed By: Clemen4daworld On: September 20, 2003 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm well it rush, you could of put more effort into it but hey it just fanfiction. It preety funny actually if people take this seriously dont you think after all it just fanfiction right. Until next time take care. |
Reviewed By: .... On: March 02, 2003 11:51 CST
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This is a disgrace to Seijuro Hiko. This was pethatic and stupide. I can't beleive you waisted your time on this |
Reviewed By: Setsuka On: February 24, 2003 10:41 CST
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I agree completely with the first reviewer. This piece of writing is so pathetic, overall, it's even sickening to look at. I won't say this is what always goes on in one's mind that they put down in words, but it is humiliating and disgusting to the characters you have written.
True,they are fictional characters. But unlike real human beings, even THEY do not deserve to be abused as PATHETICALLY like this.
You really know how to ruin a good character.Be proud, you rank as the worst writer. |
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