| "The 1st Son Daughter???" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Reviewed By: please update On: January 27, 2007 14:56 CST
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WHY WON'T YOU UPDATE! PLEASE UPDATE RRRRREEEAAALLLLLY SOOOOOOOON.
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Reviewed By: update soon please On: January 23, 2007 15:25 CST
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HELLOOOO are you alive still (nocks on computer screen)
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Reviewed By: UPDATE!!! On: December 29, 2006 13:55 CST
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HELLOOOOO Are still alive?!?!?!?!?!? Update soon please, K!?!?!
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Reviewed By: ???Unknown??? On: December 27, 2006 13:59 CST
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Okay taking a break is good and all but almost 7 mounths!! Come on! HELLO! Are you alive still! Please UPDATE!! UPDATEupdateUPDATEupdateUPDATE!! PRETTY PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: ??? On: December 26, 2006 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY! When are you going to UPDATE?????????????????????? PLEASE UPDATE SOON! REALLY REALLY SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: ??? On: November 20, 2006 17:40 CST
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When are you going to update? Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: lil rin On: November 03, 2006 18:41 CST
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Update???????? !
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Reviewed By: ??? On: September 27, 2006 16:39 CDT
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How long does it take to update a chapter? UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please
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Reviewed By: ??? On: September 25, 2006 17:06 CDT
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what's taking soooo long to update! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! Soon please!
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Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 16:22 CDT
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whats taking you so long to update?
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Title: UPDATE...and uh...please help.
Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 22:06 CDT
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i still want you to update!!!!!!! anyway, i'm having some troubles with putting up a story an the web, and i could really use your help! if you could asap, i'd REALLY appreciate it! i'll tell you more in detail if you e mail me at, marlagirl44@msn.com Please keep up the good work with the story... and uh...(not trying to be a nag here!)HELP!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 18:19 CDT
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PPPPPPPLLLLLLLLEEEAAAAASSEEEEEEEEE UUUUUUUUUPPPPPPDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAATTTEEEEEEE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! preetyPlease(does the lip thing) :)
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Title: the best
Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the best that i've ever read! you had a few sp&gram mistkes, and kami as in God is not spelled like kame as in the turtle hermit. if you havn't finished the story...PLEASE DO IT!!!!! *does best puppy dog face and does a little dance*
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Reviewed By: 9l0 On: August 27, 2006 20:04 CDT
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totally awesome fanfic - hope you manage to update it soon! =)
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Title: update soon please
Reviewed By: ??? On: August 15, 2006 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update real soon. pleeease
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