| "The 1st Son Daughter???" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Title: UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!!!!!
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH!!!!WHY'D YOU STOP! I WANTED TO READ MORE...*SOBS* It was really sad...I feel bad for Minako...and Kasumi...is such a BITCH! I really don't like people like her! Poor Minako, Trunks...I really didn't like Goten i this chap. He was acting like an ass. Still fantastic work! Update soon!!!
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Title: No!!
Reviewed By: Idris Dag-Ellams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 16:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
No!! Why did you stop there?! Ahh!! keep on going I want to know what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: Animeheart not signed on On: March 30, 2006 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked that it was longer than usual. So Trunks is starting to like Minako...interesting...and what does that mean, he's going to leave for good if he helps Minako...very very interesting... anyway, great chap! ^-^
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Title: Me!!!
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the fic! Minako is so determined. I like that. And Trunks blushes alot *hugs* that's cute. Vegeta ALWAYS thinks he's so 'smart' huh? I always like the parts when Goten thinks Trunks and Minako are gonna do something perverted. It's funny. Keep the GREAT fic going, please! ^-^
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Title: it's me again
Reviewed By: Idris Dag-Ellams [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ha Vegeta is soo mean and Minako is so clueless "Whats handsome" she's so cute keep on going with the story!
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Minako is so clueless. So it's a love triangle thingy? I love those. I've been meanig to ask, is Kasumi just putting up a fake act? Just curious, cuz she seems phony to me. Anyway, it was a great chap!
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Title: I'M SUCH AN IDIOT.
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 18:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry, I meant chap 18.
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Title: Back again
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a nice ending to chap 8. I liked how it was, when Bulma was in a "flashback" phase. Ok, now I'm off to go see what minako looks like!!!^^
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Title: oooooh.....
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is Trunks in trouble? what's gonna happen? WHAT?? Answer me, dammit!! Please!!! I must know or I will DIE!!!! Ok, my rant is over. Anyway, uh, great chap...
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Title: Continue!!!
Reviewed By: Animeheart(Not logged in right now) On: March 18, 2006 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the next 4 chaps (Yes, my computer crashed.) You are such a great writer! It's really funny too! Please update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: jessy123 On: March 15, 2006 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC!!! Update soon k !!!
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Title: i'm back
Reviewed By: Idris Dag-Ellams [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it please update!!
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Title: Keep it goin'!!!!
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 11:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha! That was funny. Trunks and Goten are so silly! But I can't wait to see what happens next. Things are really heating up, huh? Great job! You piece it so well together! (Don't worry, my next chap will be up soon. sorry for the LONG delay! ^^)
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Title: Ooh...
Reviewed By: KitsuneKaji On: February 23, 2006 11:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update chapter 12. It's getting really good! I wonder if they'll find out that Trunks is staying at the sons' house...
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Title: Yet another great chap!
Reviewed By: Animeheart (Not online as of right now) On: February 19, 2006 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, looks like Minako is fallin' for someone! ^^ Anyway, great job once again! I hope you update chap 8 soon! (Don't worry, no pressure, I still haven't updated Anrui yet ^^U... How lazy am I!
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