| "The 1st Son Daughter???" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Title: UPDATE...and uh...please help.
Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 22:06 CDT
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i still want you to update!!!!!!! anyway, i'm having some troubles with putting up a story an the web, and i could really use your help! if you could asap, i'd REALLY appreciate it! i'll tell you more in detail if you e mail me at, marlagirl44@msn.com Please keep up the good work with the story... and uh...(not trying to be a nag here!)HELP!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 18:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
PPPPPPPLLLLLLLLEEEAAAAASSEEEEEEEEE UUUUUUUUUPPPPPPDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAATTTEEEEEEE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! preetyPlease(does the lip thing) :)
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Title: the best
Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the best that i've ever read! you had a few sp&gram mistkes, and kami as in God is not spelled like kame as in the turtle hermit. if you havn't finished the story...PLEASE DO IT!!!!! *does best puppy dog face and does a little dance*
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Reviewed By: 9l0 On: August 27, 2006 20:04 CDT
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totally awesome fanfic - hope you manage to update it soon! =)
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Title: update soon please
Reviewed By: ??? On: August 15, 2006 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update real soon. pleeease
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Reviewed By: Piccoloslove [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 14:19 CDT
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I hope you continue, Im really enjoying it XD
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Emperor Sun Hai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 01:00 CDT
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This fic's really interesting, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: lil rin On: June 26, 2006 18:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Write more soon. Please?
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Reviewed By: lucidangel (too lazy to log in) On: June 15, 2006 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy moly what a long story! but its written very well. i kinda got out of DB/Z/GT, but your story made me feel nostalgic ^^ very good writing plz write more stories and thanx for ur comments btw!
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL that was funny in the beginning with Bra and Trunks! Wow, I wouldn't exactly wanna be downstairs either...And my fave was when Goten said 'Oh, we were just talking about how Minako and Trunks love each other.' XD Well, yet another great chap! I could read this fic FOREVER!!! (That's why you are on my faves list!)
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Title: LOL!!!!
Reviewed By: lil rin On: June 06, 2006 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! LOL! Please keep writing. No matter how long it takes, I want to read about Vegita's defeat at the hands of a girl! As if the Pink shirt wasn't enough! I just love it when vegeta is humiliated. Everyone does remember the pink shirt, right?
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Reviewed By: hehe I'll never tell On: June 04, 2006 16:35 CDT
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KASUMI IS A BITCHA!!
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Reviewed By: MOSTLIKELYTOSUCEED! On: June 04, 2006 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! IF THEY WERE MY PARENTS AND I HEARD THAT, I WOULD HAVE BEEN SO DISGUSTED! UPDATE!
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Title: Woah...
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That...was an...interesting anniversary...I can't help but wonder what Goku meant by 'I'll repay every minute of it'...he he...Um, yeah, dirty mind. ANYWAYZ (nervous laughter) Awesome chap!! I always love how Trunks checks up on Minako. Like a guardian angel!!! The showdown between vegeta and Minako is sure to kick ass.
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Title: YAHOO!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH!!! I LOVE CHAPS 27 AND 28!!! MINAKO IS COOL!!! CHICHI TOO!!! YEAH GO GIIIRRRRLLLZZZZZZ *Passes out* (Uh..so yeah, great chaps! I loved it! Your best chaps yet!! The mother-daughter bonding thing was so cute. I hope Minako kicks vegeta's annoying ass!!!)
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