| "When a stranger calls" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: addicted2skittles On: July 01, 2008 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This probably won't get continued, but good work. I don't mind that much that it's a knock off of an urban legend, it was entertaining to read. Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: Desmond tate On: August 01, 2007 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the story please contiue the second half of the story
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Reviewed By: ??????????? On: May 30, 2006 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool i like it lemme guess whos behind the door..... hmmm....... ITACHI!!! or , no nic with the worst drawing shes ever seen!!!! no, no, no, the kids watching adult movies!!!! no! God, ill stick with itachi..
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Reviewed By: Zoe-chanchan On: February 22, 2006 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it alot i loved the clif hanger alot and u need pictures with it that would be cool and let me guess who the person it uh.. saske? i don;t know well I just liked it
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Reviewed By: Ass Whooper On: February 09, 2006 10:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, for one thing, this better be a parody, cause that movie is a damn rip off of a good urban legend. They just changed the name. Two, this isn't YOUR cliffhanger, this is whoever made the damn movie's idea. But you do have good discreptive work. Try something more original next time.
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