Reviewed By: Sweetie_pie392 On: April 06, 2002 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The reson I rated the style of writing the way I did was because I like more Takari. The spelling and grammer was Okay. I did see a couple of mistakes though. I think you should write a Takari based fanfic. If you did I would definetly read it because I would be interested because you are very origional and creative.
signed,
Sweetie_pie392 |
