| "The Dark Snares the Light" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: LOVED the Story :)
Reviewed By: seacil [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the story a lot, especially the end at the table with them all together, and Sunako's one romantic line to Kyohei about him being the only light in her darkness. Those two are my favorite characters, and you portrayed them pretty well. Good job! :) sincerely, seacil
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Reviewed By: Azshara [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 23:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Hehe, I wonder who in japan decided that nosebleeds were connected to seeing something sexy... Great story, I loved it!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: February 11, 2007 16:56 CST
Comment/Review:
LOL, that one-shot was awesome and I LOVED the ending!!!
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: October 16, 2006 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL I just got into watching the anime series of "The Wallflower" and I thought it was great. I loved the one-shot too. Real Kinky. LOL Keep up the good work. I also have a challenge for anyone who's a fan of WallFlower. And if you're an Inuyasha fan, that's even better. I'd like to propose a WallFlower/Inuyasha Crossover. Kagome/Kyouhei, Kagome/Ranmaru, or Kagome/Takenaga pairing. It can be a one-shot or continuous story based on the anime/manga plot or otherwise. Whether Sunako should be in it or not is up to you. The Fic can be of any rating. If you'd like to accept the challenge or not, My fanfic account is at FanFiction.Net under Kurama'sFoxyMiko. If you don't have an account there, a link to my email is at the very bottom of my profile. and like i said, Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: kashuneko On: February 12, 2006 20:29 CST
Comment/Review:
OOOOooooh Baby! You have no idea how much I loved this story! Finally an explanation for the nosebleeds that makes sense! So very very very hot!
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