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| "The Dragon Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: mizu123 On: October 09, 2009 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is a wonderful story, it is very creative and one of the best hp/ygo crossovers ive seen in a while... i hope you decide to continue it someday!
| Reviewed By: Saiyamaru(nli) On: May 05, 2006 23:06 CDT
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...I'm hooked, what more can I say? The idea is very interesting, and I haven't read any like it before. I enjoy reading the interaction between Ryou and Bakura, just as much as I enjoy watching this story slowly unfurl and mature. I'm not a huge fan of cross overs, though I'll admit to having numerous plot bunnies featuring them, and the dragon is a nice twist. In truth, I'm surprised at how much I love this fic. Usually a HP Cross-over + magical creature, usually ='s Saiyamaru running screaming and cursing the other direction. I look forward to your next update. Ja
| Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 05:54 CST
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Great story I really like it. I'm glad we will be back in the present but the flashbacks were wonderful.
| Reviewed By: Vamp468 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Another chappie (updates are fun) ::smiles::. I love that Bakura's so conscious (by that I mean caring of what said feelings are) of Ryou feelings, that just makes it all the sweeter. Ryou's dad is entertaining in the way that he is completely missing the googly eyes that are in play around him. O.o and I rated twice this time.
| Reviewed By: sglily [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My! You are on a roll! I really enjoy this story. And, I apologize because I had started a review twice now and both times it was rather unintelligent... I am not claiming this is any better but at least I will fulfill my duty to praise a good story! The first chapter was sweet... I especially enjoyed Bakura waking up (or being awoken) and rememembering a little lovin' with his bedmate and hoping that Ryou was into some more... the dragon twist was really neat. I look forward to the next installment to find out more about the sand dragon and just how Ryou and Bakura intend to hide her... The next three chapters are exceptional. I was really curious (and a little nervous) about how you were going to explain and meld the two worlds of YuGiOh! and Harry Potter... I have to say you out did yourself. Very well planned out and executed. Even with all the technical aspects, I honed right in on the emotional and relationship aspect of Ryou and Bakura. It was sweet how little looks shot across the bedroom from one to the other... Ryou flushing cutely. I especially liked how Ryou reacted when he first came face-to-face with Bakura... fainting would was wholly appropriate! Oh, and my sources as well have "Adjo" meaning "Treasure"... it was actually a male name in ancient Egypt. I have it in my little list I pick and choose from when needing one while writing my swill. ; ) I love this story as is but I'll throw something out there for you... it would be really interesting to see your take on Ryou's and Bakura's budding romance in this context in maybe a side story? I'd definitely read it!
| Reviewed By: Vamp468 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I guess I forgot to review after I read the first time. I love Ryou, Bakur apairings, they just make such a cute couple. Especially in this one. And for a Harry Potter crossover it kicks that proverbial ass. Hehe. 'Til next time...
| Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 05:56 CST
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Really good story. I really like it.
| Reviewed By: Aislynn Goldleaf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 12:40 CST
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More proof as to why you're on my Favorite Author's list. You've combined 2, well 3 of my favorite things: Ryou, with Bakura, and a dragon! I could see the poor dear curled up on what's left of their bed, blankets, pillows, books, the remains of Ryou's desk seemingly scattered haphazardly, but actually arranged into a quite comfy nest for "Goldie" or would it be "Sandy"? For some reason, I have the distinct impression that said dragon is female. Oh, that's such a good image! Think I'll go grab my sketchbook!
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