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| "Strong Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Title: My Head!!!!!
Reviewed By: JI IJ On: June 11, 2013 18:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So much mindfuckery, Dear lord, that was really awesome but now my head hurts. Why I read this thing is a mystery I always hated the Miari saga because of how it made my head feel. This story was a masterpiece. Wish there was an epilogue that tied things up, but oh well, its not a huge deal. Seriously a great story but you should have a disclaimer warning of impending headaches. Sincerely, Drake | Reviewed By: alexnbl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 08:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read the whole story in one night. I have been a member of this site for a long time, and this is the first review i've chosen to write. This was incredible. And the ending just made me go back through the story again to look for all the things i missed. I wish there was like a short epilogue or something, because i am left with this feeling of a lack of closure, but then again i'm always going to want more of a good thing. Any other stories you have written are definitely going to at least get a glance over by me.
| Title: I'm not into yaoi stories...but...
Reviewed By: goddess.muriel On: December 08, 2007 20:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As i explained on the tittle of the review...I usually don't read yaoi themed stories...but I found this accidentally and I have to admit that I hooked me until the end...and I cried and shocked me more than once. And the end...oh man...the end was like OMG! It shocked me, but on the other side...it was like maybe Mirai will die...but not like i thought it would be. I enjoyed it too much...and I don't review everyone. I hope to someday read soemthing as strong as this one...I noticed that I was made a little while...but still....wonderful.
| Reviewed By: Liddleheart [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 11:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear I've ended up searching the web desperately just for another complete fanfiction you've written. Seriously, I would love to just sit and have a coffee with you or something, not to be weird or anything but I'd love to just have a chat with you, just from reading your stories your mind absolutely fascinates me! You are so good at describing everything in ways that mean the reader cannot help but feel all the emotions they're supposed to, I was grinning like an idiot when Goten finally gave in and hugged Trunks, smiling with tears in my eyes then Trunks hugged his mom and the end just made my breath catch in my throat. Oh and the second example of love just chilled me and made me feel sick in a way that usually only reality can do. You're a genius and I damn well hope you convert these into publishable works because you deserve to be a published author.
| Reviewed By: 35468461 On: December 18, 2006 15:46 EST
Comment/Review:
change the names and publish... it's seriously that good.
| Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: ForeverFallen On: August 11, 2006 00:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, this is one amazing story. Theres somethings I didn't understand, expecially near end. I still need to let a lot of emotion settle in. I was crying when I read the letters. My heart skipped a beat and I couldn't breathe for a second when I read the ending. This is the best fanfiction I've ever read handsdown.
| Title: From Todesengel
Reviewed By: To Things of Minds On: July 22, 2006 17:49 EDT
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Dear Thingsofminds. I'm glad that my story could touch you and that to some extent, you could relate and understand the characters. You seem like a very interesting person and I would very much enjoy further contact with you. Please feel free to email me at FlatterMeRotten@aol.com Thank you and please contact me if you read this.
| Reviewed By: thingsofminds On: July 22, 2006 12:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been by far one of the best fanfics i have ever read and believe me when i say i have read a lot of them.I'm a lot like Trunks except for the drugs i'm exactly like what he was.The only difference being i don't have someone to love or a friend who gives two fucks about it to try and help me.Mind you i do realize i need help it's not normal to feel such a form of detachment or joy when i hurt people emotionally, but what's the point in changing when i have no one to do it for?.Honestly speaking i think of dying every other day and have attempted suicide about 3 times already, but of course i'm too much of a coward to even do that i would be doing the world a favor anyways.Truly i'm a disgusting creature feeling sorry for myself all the time of course nobody has to know about that.Thanks for the story it was worth reading, it actually conveyed something besides the sex.
| Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: vegetachik7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 22:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know if my words can even describe the absolute awe I am feeling toward this story. I have NEVER read a fanfiction that has brought me to tears before, but Strong Heart has done. The symbols, situations, details, characters, and EVERYTHING was just astounding. I loved...LOVED the comparisons between the Trunks. It's amazing how similar Trunks is to Vegeta..or how he used to be. I was shocked by the father/son relationship and all the hardships the characters had to go through dealing with Trunks. The descriptions of scenery was so spellbinding. When Trunks' heart is finally opened, I was drawn into his world as he saw beauty for once. As I read, I was absolutely sucked in as Trunks treated others so cold-heartedly, but it was written so perfectly. I could keep going on and on. Each character had his or her own unique relationship and situation with Trunks. Through his cold actions, he changed those around him, and then,he was ultimately changed in the end. Ah, the end. My heart litteraly stopped when Bulma tells Trunks about Mirai. I actually felt a shrill of terror at the haunting words! The plot, set-up, and planning of this story is genius and I am blown away by your writing style(as usual) and awesome ideas. Great, perfect...I have to stop because this will never end. Amazing!
| Title: Heart Stoping
Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 18:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I started reading this story I wasn't totally sure I was going to like it but I did. Life is always filled with hurt, even love is. This story is a masterful blending of lost and awaking, realtiy and the space beyond this life time. I was competely drawn into you words. (dispite the formating troubles MM is clearly having). It's imposbale to detail to you how this tory made me feel and it DID make me feel. Pain, relife, anger and longing. The ending put a cap on everything in a way that makes you sit back and say "Dear Gods...." There is a glaring lesson that you covered so perfectly, nothing worth havig comes easily. You must fight, you must be willing to put your own heart on the line. Coldness will leave you suffering in dark lonelyness in the end. Thank you for writting this. ~Wind to your Wings, Kethry~
| Reviewed By: Chloe On: April 11, 2006 04:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see I'm not the only one who cried the whole way through that last chapter. Wow. The end hasn't sunk in yet at all. I need to find some tissues now. Um... I will probably be back later to make a more useful review, but for now, just... Um... No words left. Wow. More later...
| Title: Good one!!
Reviewed By: MAYLINE On: March 31, 2006 14:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I not into reading yaoi oriented stories...but this one was awsome! Even the plot of the story was too good to not get a read...most of the things that heppened here shcked me..although that at some point I was going to get crazy by the gore of some chapters,,,specially David's case...but the final chapter...OH MY GOD...I CRIED AL THE WAY WHILE READING IT!!!! Is hard for me to cry whith a story and you made it...congratulations!!!
| Reviewed By: anz On: March 20, 2006 08:23 EST
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explosive...just one question....? trunks says.."the dragon saw to that..." what exactly does that statement mean? other than that ...very explosive~!
| Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: March 18, 2006 19:04 EST
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Beautiful.
| Title: Unexpected
Reviewed By: Teera On: March 18, 2006 17:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn girl..that just blew me away..As I said before, I WILL have to revisit this story because there's so many things I haven't fully grasped..the words you write, they are so beautifully written and they describe destruction in the most gorgeous ways..ways I can't even begin to imagine. And not to mention how shocking the ending was..Damn..I feel, awestruck because it's like, oh my God..This story inspires me to be better; it's just stunning and leaves me in amazement..like, okay, I have to go back and fully understand this..
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