"Alas The Day Of Mourning Is Over" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 06:25 CST Comment/Review: It's gonna takek a bit more than 13 lines to make Vegeta say 'I love you'. It was to short, and there wasn't enough details. Otherwise, I think that you are a great writer, it just takes a little practice.
| Title: cute Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: February 10, 2006 10:08 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This was a nice one shot. Good job.
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