Title: Serena's Past Reviewed By:Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 01:57 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Reviewed By:Kari moon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 19:00 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 4 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review: Even though some of the spelling is a little off it's a good start and if it's going to be a hentai it's gotta have the stuff that makes the rating! Try try and try some more you'll get it soon no one's perfect.
