| "Hotsprings Cause Smut" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude,like, that ending was freakin hilarious, uh, there was one thing though that i feel i should point out,...you randomly switch from past tense to present tense then back to past tense, im just weird when it comes to stuff liekthat though, so dont worry about it. that was one of the best Sasuke/Kakashi's i've read
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Reviewed By: TheBlackRose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY! It's Bara! Just got done reading this story... and.... I LIKED IT! XD lol! I can't believe you put that joke at the end! That was baaaad! I liked it! -.- You better continue it in another story. I mean it! >.< And Where's that strip tease Iruka was supposed ta do!? *looks for Iruka* Iruuuuka-saaaaaaan! :3
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Title: yes, continue in another fic!
Reviewed By: thatreevesgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic, thoroughly enjoyed it, though Chapter 4 was the one that really drew me in (at least I think that was the chapter). I loved the encorporation of humor, very nice. And Kakashi/Sasuke fics are too rare, thanks for adding one to the herd.
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Title: omfg
Reviewed By: bloodkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nosebleed!!!!!!!!!!11 lol that was really good!!!! o and i luv how u put that last joke in there at the end :D
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Title: *applauds*
Reviewed By: vampirepuppet [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the lemon was great, well worth the wait. and the ending killed me! 'i want it harder too!' good work.
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Reviewed By: Ceer Uchiwa [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 02:40 CDT
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I was just flicking through my favourites when, what do ya know, i found this dtory! I must say tha it is a REALLY enticing story that we are all waiting and wanting to read more of! Im sure many of us, including myself, want to see what the angry/horny uchiha does as the super uke!
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Reviewed By: evanescencefreak14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! THIS IS MY FIRST REVIEW! POST NEW CHAPTERS SOON! THAT WAS SO GOOD!!!!!!!!! ^__________^ KEEP UP WITH THE AWESOME WORK!
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Reviewed By: punkin02 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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I think Sasuke should stay that way :) You don't see Sasuke as uke in a lot of stories. Which is a shame really :)
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Reviewed By: NNCS [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
MY god!!! forst of all, I really like this fic so far...but please, PLEASE give me some smut!!!! *withers slightly* I thrive on it and several other essentials of life (aka: A good bathroom, soap, yaoi, mochi, ramen, comfy clothes, yuri, and other types of hentai!) I will continue to read this!!!
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Reviewed By: darkdragon91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 22:57 CDT
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Please write more! This is a really nice plot you have going here, albeit the chapters are a bit short, and makes the story seem a bit choppy. But that's ok! Just please continue, this is a really good story you got going!
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Reviewed By: Ceer Uchiwa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 07:21 CDT
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Ohh... What happens? Please continue! I sooo want to know what happens to Sasuke!
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Reviewed By: Lil_Pix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 15:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Lol sneaky ninja bastard
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