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| "My Naga Knight" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: KaoriHigurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2010 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't see how people can flame this, it's amazing. People really should realize we put these fics up because we enjoy writing them, and not so they can tell us that it's crap and shit like that. I know firsthand about the cruelty people have, with not knowing how to do CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. There are a few spelling errors, but nothing too major. Other than that, it's just exactly what my review title says: AMAZING! Please update soon, okay? I can't wait until you do! :D
| Reviewed By: yodaihiro [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I left ya one review under the nick yo sometime ago because I was too lazy to log in. But anyway I'm back with a review for chapters 5 & 6. I must say you continue to impress me very much with this fic. I love how you created this world of Eytheria (sp?) taking two awesome characters from YYH and plunging them back into the dark ages. It's just awesome and so original! Jin and Touya as naga demons is just utterly brilliant. And Suzaku as Jin's estranged, womanizing brother? Now, that's something I didn't expect. Wow...this whole story is just wow. All the characters but 3 are completely original, and that is just awesome...it's hard to write almost a purely OC story...but you're doing such a wonderful job at it. I'm also glad that things are becoming a bit better for Blythe and Neda thanks to the kindness of Thane, though I don't think he'd be to kind to Touya and Jin, who I hope can find some way back to the girls. It seems Neda has found two of Jin's scales...wonder what she'll do when she find out where they came from. And perhaps later on the naga demons and the humans will find some sort of middle ground with the prejudice they hold for one another...but I guess I can see the reasoning for both sides, though I'm more apt to take the demons' side...because they're only killing animals to stay alive. Humans basically do the same thing. But anywho my favorite OC of yours is Dustin. He's just so awesome and caring and overprotective. Hm...guess I ought to cut off and I get to some of your other stuff. Looking forward to the next update. -Yo
| Reviewed By: Morwen Re On: May 24, 2006 13:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
pretty good if i do say so myself. it's a little bit under par with your other works, but the plot still seems interesting! oh, and just a little pet peve... female foals are called fillies...
| Reviewed By: yo On: May 08, 2006 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...definitely original! I will be keeping a close eye on this story! Hope you update soon! Take care, Yo
| Reviewed By: Darkest_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gigles* I Love it. It's AWSOME I hope you continue soon, It is a marvoules Fic. I really want to know what happens next I'll Be waiting here wondering *winks* Hope to read more soon.
| Reviewed By: Raistlin Windblade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I am so struck in awe over how this has already begun and I am not just making that up or exaggerating. For this to be a twist in midevial times and making the YYH Jin and Touya Naga demons I have to say if people don't flock to this, they are missing out on a brilliant story. As always, you capture the emotions well and the actions I can see being performed--like a little movie in my head. Just utterly astounding, love. I seriously can't wait to read more. =3
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