| "Hostile" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
Reviewed By: redrose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 14:41 CDT
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please update soon its a really good story.
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Reviewed By: OreoGirl96 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 20:35 CDT
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You dumb pervert that was the most disgusting story ever.You should be ashamed you ass.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... really like it so far... it's kinda weird but the others are treating kagome like she's their friend while they seem to forget that she was kidnapped and bought by inuyasha... what backgrounds do inuyasha, sango, miroku & shippo have... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: whitmangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 07:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O I love this story. Thank so much for updating. Plz do it again soon.
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Title: i wanna kno!!!
Reviewed By: Kawii-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 08:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more!!! i really want to know whats gonna happen next
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Reviewed By: Tanaga Mannie_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i loved the story but why did inu end up liking kagome weird. but funny lol plz continue.
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Reviewed By: LumChan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 00:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please write more!
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Title: HAHAHA WHORE!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kawii-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!! KAGOME SHOULD HAVE PUT SOME CLEANIN STUFF IN INU'S EYES LOL. UPDATE SOON!!!! LATER!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 20:20 CDT
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Thank you thank you thank you thank you for the new chapter! It was just what I needed. I like this story and was starting to thing you'd forgotten about it. ~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 19:32 CDT
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HEY!!!!!! So......... how r u? Ya uh I like it, I like it alot!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 12:38 CDT
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Thanks for the update, it was much needed. I'll be looking forward to the next installment. B reading U!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive just come across your story. Although I do find it rather interesting, I was wondering if you perhaps had a beta for it. The story itself has potential. I think you just a little help with the spelling and such. I was wondering too, about more background info. Like the ones that took Kagome. It was mentioned Sango was a criminal? Well, OK, how so? And how is she involved with Inu. And whats the deal with Inu as well. I like what you have thus far, you just need a little help with it is all. Please dont take this as a flame. That is something I do NOT do. EVER! These are just some suggestions. I did put your story on faves, as Id like to see how it all progresses. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: babyapplepie231 On: July 20, 2006 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good so far please update
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Title: WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kawii-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more i really wanna kno wut gonna happen!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 20:33 CDT
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Where is the next chapter? What happened to the next chapter? We will be good so please, please, PPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE EEEE, update soon!~B reading U!
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Title: ya
Reviewed By: Jozu Oruha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good story. Plz write more.
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Reviewed By: kyonkichi-luver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is ridin'! I was crackin up throughout the whole fic! Inuyasha is a trip and he's mean. Plz update soon!
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Title: WRITE MORE PLEAZ!!!
Reviewed By: Kawii-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY IS INU SO MEAN!!!!!!!!!!! U SHOULD PUT SESSHY IN THIS FIC TOO! XD KEEP UP THE GUD WORK!!
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Title: Tell me more!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, update soon!~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: IC On: May 30, 2006 07:00 CDT
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inu is such an ass
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: May 29, 2006 11:17 CDT
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I'm not sure how to take Inuyasha';s attitude toward Kagome. It's pretty confusing, but maybe he'll make more sense later. Anyway, I hope Kags will be okay! *smiles* You're not doing bad, and I like this story... keep at it n.n
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Reviewed By: Azalie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 23:13 CDT
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loving it so far! hope to see an update soon
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Title: UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: kittyevil78 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay me like! I never saw the movie (can't stomach such stuff) and if this plot was taken from it then the compliments I'm about to give you are null and void. This story is good so far. There are spelling mistake so I don't see how you're getting tens for that. Not trying to be rude, just saying people should take their scoring more seriously. I think there should be more background info about this world of criminals and also about demons in modern times. It would help to get rid of confusion. And there is something I want to discuss with you but I won't email you without your permission so you can email me first.
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 01:07 CST
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*clicks and adds to favorites* You've already enraptured me. Write more, and soon, or I shall smite you
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Reviewed By: LumChan(too lazy to log in) On: March 10, 2006 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha is such a jerk but I still love this fic. Are you going to include shippo, miroku, or kouga in this fic? Thank you for updating -- Keep writing please!
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Reviewed By: lum-chan On: February 11, 2006 01:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so far please update soon your writing is great!!
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Reviewed By: Samishiichan On: February 10, 2006 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luff it!I want more!!!I was thinking about going to see that movie bu I didnt...I still want to though!I really luff it keep going!!!=^_^=
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Title: UPDATE NOW please
Reviewed By: Liz Lite On: February 10, 2006 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story has great potential so keep the updates comin and your fic will be a hit sssssssssssssooooooooooo UPDATE NOW please!!!!!!!
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Title: UPDATE NOW
Reviewed By: Kurama Mate On: February 10, 2006 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the fic update soon
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