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| "Mutanation" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: HAHAH!...A!
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: February 27, 2006 18:38 CST
Comment/Review:
A+ babe, this is gold. I love the street talking, and can't WAIT to see the nice big juicy lemon ^-^ Love ya babe. Now can I have a kiss? Please?
| Reviewed By: shevaleon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, this was definitely fun to read - again. ^o^ And thank you for the kisses, I especially prefer Duo and I hope that next time he won't stop at my cheek. *grins* Some good moment: 1) Q: 'at least he talks' - must have been really lonely for him to spend a lot of time with 3 most *talkative* people in the GW universe 2) Heero: 'Yuy, Heero Yuy' - did you mean it like "Bond, James Bond" 3) I knew it!!! I just knew it that Wu-bear wears pink underwear!!! 4) Hope, Hee-chan doesn't go to the toilet with his laptop too. Please, for Pete's sake remove 'ne' from Duo's speech - it sounds too girly. And what do you mean a lemon in the end?!!! Are you planning to leave us with only one yellow goodness?!!!! If so, you're definitely cruel. That's all for now, Hugs & lotsa chocolates, Anya
| Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the way you started the fic off was a real eye catcher ^_~ hotness!!! now where's my kiss? lol. anywho, update soon, kay? me likey this.
| Reviewed By: shevaleon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the beginning and seeing that Hee-chan and Do-do are already kissing, there's nothing more person could wish for! Except for a good hot lemon, of course!!! It would be a pleasure too if it won't take you a lot of time to post the next chapter. So all there remains to be said is good luck and come back soon. Hugs
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