Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 23:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just... no, I HAVE to say something about this... I know that this story is actually fairly well written an all. I mean you cover your gramatical bases and such but. I COULD NOT enjoy it. I just couldn't. They are FAR TOO YOUNG to be engaging in any of that. Change their ages, seriously to like 13 at the LEAST. 10 year olds are not that emotionaly intuned with themselves to have that kind of relationships. CERTAINLY not little boys. Blade children or not, it does not matter. It's just not a possibility. Even if it is, that is some SERIOUS child porn...I don't care if it's written but it's young enough(usually anyhing under the teen years is) to squick the usual yaoi reader and even writer out. PLEASE take this off and CHANGE the ages!
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