| "Sonic Adventure 2: Dark Tomorrow" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Shadow 6271 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
urr..sepuku? suicide? Espio was going to plunge a sword into his chest, twist it, and drive it up through himself? a bit bloody don'tcha think?
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Reviewed By: Shadow 6271 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 09:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my favourite story on MM. I love Shadows attitude, how he beat the crap out of metal! its great. Please finish it all! i worship you. and put Shadow in more, maybe have him befriend Cream and she turn him to their side
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Title: woah
Reviewed By: TheRealScootTh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 10:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it i don't like the fact sonics dead but apart from that great i loved Metals cocky sonic like attitude update PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL LLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: iamsomeone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heya long time no read lol. sorry i would have reviewed befor but ive just been a little distracted lol can't wait till next chapter that fight seen with metal was great update soon please =)
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Title: wtf
Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 15:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Shadow got his whopped!!! that was amazing real good...
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Reviewed By: i.am.someone On: October 20, 2006 13:01 CDT
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OMG you finally updated its been so long and i'm so happy you updated how long has been bout 2 months lol please update faster than you have done recently not being rude or anything but well thats just me
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Reviewed By: i.am.someone On: August 09, 2006 02:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow nice fic and its got big chapters thats even better keep up the good work. i'll review after the next chapter bye
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Some Guy That Loves This Story On: July 03, 2006 08:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to continue this. This is one of the most wonderful and creative stories I've ever read. It is absolutely amazing. I mean, wow!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Xaldin On: June 12, 2006 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Just... wow. You've taken one of the hardest consepts in the Sonic Fan-fic universe to write and just nailed it right in the heart. Your writing style and depiction of the changed Sonic Characters fit beautifully with the storyline, and I cannot wait for the next chapter to arrive.
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Title: DAMN
Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 15:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
FOR A SEC I THOUGH IT WAS COMMANDER OH WELL GOOD THOUGH
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Title: FFRG - chapter 3
Reviewed By: Silver Armada [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 13:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have to say I really enjoyed reading your work (and will continue to do so). The characters are in-character and I really like how you characterized Knuckles--I feel that he is a character that is grossly OOC in a lot of fics, so I applaud you for doing such a wonderful job with him. Spelling and grammar are spot-on, the only thing I have to criticize is a bit of repetition. You repeat Knuckles's name a lot when it's unnecessary. As long as Knuckles is still the character you are referring to in a paragraph, you can use the pronoun "he" the whole way through. Also, when Knuckles, Tails and Amy are talking about the mission, the characters have a few too many "Well, ..." and "Look guys, ..." Adding in unnecessary words like that DOES add to the personality of the characters, as people do have a tendency to use filler words like that, but I think in some spots there are a few too many. It's not a huge deal because I even fall into this trap in my writing, but just something to note. I really enjoyed the actions scenes (action-junkie here, woohoo!) because they're very clearly written but not SO clear as to lack any personality to them at all. Overall, keep up the good work, and maybe snag a beta (if you don't already have one) to try and catch those repetitive words. Thanks for submitting to FFRG!
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