| "Two Girls a Guy and a Picnic" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: crimson_blade On: January 15, 2007 03:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing, there is too much yaoi, there should be more yuri, or mixed stories like this one.
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Reviewed By: phatom of uranus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 17:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
one I didn't steal your my cousin said he wrote it so I put It online two fuck you,infact fuck you uncle to
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Title: Just Lurking
Reviewed By: amalgam On: March 11, 2006 04:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was naughty!!! thoroughly enjoyed!
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 15:27 CST
Comment/Review:
That was cute and funny. I liked it a lot.
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Reviewed By: JACKIE903 On: February 25, 2006 21:37 CST
Comment/Review:
MAN U R GOOD NEXT TIME TRY TO PAR UP RITZ/WINERY
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Title: ummmm.....
Reviewed By: Lilie Jhalinky On: February 21, 2006 10:49 CST
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i dont think Ed should be with Winry... i think he should be with my big sister Alexis!!!
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Reviewed By: cryo On: February 16, 2006 23:49 CST
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*_* Riza on Winry...you win the internet. That's damn hot. And the Ed wasn't bad either, though I mourn for lack of direct Hawkeye/Ed XD Still! WINRY-SANDWICH. YUM. One bit of concrit - the repeated sound effects toward the end detract a bit. It also felt like the POV slipped a little there? Otherwise, though, this was definitely hot as hell.
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: February 13, 2006 03:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD that was a good one! i'd love to see an EdxWinry fic from you =)
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