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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Bwchase On: October 03, 2010 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i feel like there should of been another chapter but holy shit wow it was amazing one of the best storys about this topic ive ever read and beleive me thats alot.. but you should just keep going shit it would be so good and you do so great with these two charaters ... ga i just wanna know what happends next yes i know there will be pain and it will be hard to get through this but in the end you know what they say LOVE CONCURES ALL!!!!!(i know this is weird but i was even wishing that at some point naruto would turn into a girl and get it on that way too xD dont get me wrong i love the yaoi but him turning chick would open up a whole bunch more possiblitys) please WRITE MORE STORIES! allways watching Chase
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Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that was great, i loved it! you should do a sequel, you know, if you want ")peas and carrots?
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Reviewed By: omigoodness On: June 06, 2007 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hot. But, the Kyuubi sounded a bit like Yoda
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Reviewed By: NOOO!! On: May 13, 2007 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOO!!! This can't possibly be it!!Noooo!*sobs*no damn it,no! It was sooo good, please do a sequel or somthin'. Dont leave me hangin'. I'll cry some more if u dont do a sequel! I'll dround im my pools of tears! u don't want that to happen do u? no u dont cuz u luvs me! Plez, plez,plez continue with this! PLEZ! luv ya! ^^
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with Vampire Louis. You can't just leave the story like that. I want to know what happens neexxxxxtttt!!!! Please continue it ppleeeaaaaaaaassseeee!!!!!
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Reviewed By: susu On: August 27, 2006 02:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice. ALthough Im not a sasunaru or narusasu fan I really enjoyed this. good writing keep it up!
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Reviewed By: OOO000ooo On: July 20, 2006 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy...that was cold. But I liked it. Me thinks you should write a sequil of some sort. But whatever. Good story! (not logged on now. Uchiha_Itachi is my username)
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Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 21:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why... is there not more? I mean, seriously, this story is too good to just leave as is! Please consider doing a sequel? Or at least a follow up of some sort? That would be awesome in words I can't describe to you ^_^! Anyway, thanks for sharing what you have -I love it to no ends and I'll be around simply hoping for more.
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 13:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
That is so sad. Damn fox, he's so cruel! Are you going to write a follow up fic?
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Reviewed By: A anime fan girl (not logged in -.-) On: April 21, 2006 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah, that was so cool. I love that ending! Heh, but I guess it would be kind of nice if you were to continue anyway. Ah, I am so late. Well, great story, I loved it!
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Title: Mija
Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 03:03 CST
Comment/Review:
wow i really liked this story, all four chapters were short but really good, I hope to read an update soon, I must see if Kyuubi wins and breaks the bond between Naruto and Sasuke and how they will react to this after the sun rises, thanks for the great read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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Reviewed By: jujika [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 06:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've read the whole story and i must say that this is quite angsty. is that really the ending? i kinda felt sorry for sasuke... anywayz, if you could make and epilogue or something please. i'm not really that fond of those kinds of endings.... anywayz, good job and i'll be reading your other stories. ^_^
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Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BEEN FOLLOWING THIS ON ADFF.NET BUT WELL SHIT IS GOIN DOWN THERE. I LOVE THIS SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
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