| "Young at Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: shadowguard On: February 02, 2008 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story and i was so looking forward to more but you seemed to have mixed up your other story with this one and put the chapters in the wrong place, so now the latter chapters for "young at heart" are missing !
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Title: delicate and sweet
Reviewed By: maelia8 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for this fic. I am really enjoying it so far. It is nice to see another side to the normally cold and sometimes bloodthirsty Sesshomaru. I have a few questions about the time frame, though. In this fic, does an inu youkai take many years to develop? The timing is important in childhood fics, because, according to some ways of reckoning, Sesshomaru's mother dies and InuTaisho marries Izayoi, InuYasha's mother, when Sesshomaru is about six. Just thought that I would point this out for you to consider. Once again, I really love your writing style. Please keep up the good work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: DarkLover On: April 29, 2006 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why havent you updated yet!!!!!!! Great story, but who was Sesshormarus mother?
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Title: iT'S cUTE
Reviewed By: iNUGAMA On: March 05, 2006 12:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sESSHOUMARU IS SO iNNOCENT AND aDORABLE( i HOPE i SPELLED THAT rIGHT)aND THE fANFIC IS SO CUTE.aND ALSO THAT IS THE fIUFFEST THING i HAVE EVER READ.
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Title: I like it!! :)
Reviewed By: x_x_Sesshoumaru_x_x [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru is so innocent! lol I like it, please update soon!!!
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