| "Valentine Nerves" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: shu no baka (not logged in)
Reviewed By: shu no baka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 16:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oo yeah what is that read spot? CX really cute!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Whatsername [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like yoor story. Ýou, as everybody else has your own interpretation of Kai and Tala. Though it doesn't relly match mine, I really like your story and I think that you are a really good writer
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Reviewed By: Shin Rigel On: February 28, 2006 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed, very much so. Very sweet and nicely done. The only recommendation I have is to get a beta reader, just to check over any mistakes you've made, such as "half n hour" should be "Half an hour". ^-^
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Reviewed By: Isa-chan On: February 28, 2006 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it, and it's always good to read more KaiRei stories! Perhaps your sentence structure needs a bit of work, and there were some grammar and puncutation errors, but they can be easily rectified. It did move quite quickly, but you kept the interest and I liked the ending. ^_^ ~Isa~
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Reviewed By: Loving Pudding On: February 18, 2006 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a cute one shot I love Kai and how he gets all self-concious
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