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Title: tsukiko786
Reviewed By: tsukiko786 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, I know you said that you wont but are you sure you aren't going to continue this? You must admit, it could be quite funny with all of them living together... And if you do not wish to continue, would you think about letting someone else write the continuation for this story?
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Reviewed By: Bombi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10 for 10, wonderful job. I know that you said that this was to be a one shot. But the story leaves to much left unsaid. If written right it would give a great idea of angst. Think about it, you have three alfa males how would that work? If anything it would give a chance for another mindless chance to torcher Hiei. ^^ But anywho this is another wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 06:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read this one again -- it's still fantastic! I like the prophecy as your plot device, and the way they were each brought to her. I did feel a little bad for Kurama coming in 3rd, but heck, with his ego, he probably needed it spelled out, right? Not to mention, he still has Yuske. They can console each other while Hiei is busy asserting his dominance. Ha! Still, Kurama wasn't really given a choice. Hope Koenma has a room with a LARGE bed and soundproof walls ready for their return. This is such a great one-shot! It's complete, satisfying, and yet you can still imagine what might happen next. Great job! I love your writing.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: sweet_serena [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly luved it I really hope u continue it I think it would be great
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Chiisa On: June 07, 2006 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved these kinda fics. I really do. Kagome is soooo lucky. P.S. This has nothing to do with this story but on of my twin girls name is Kagome! ^_^
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Title: hmmm...
Reviewed By: unalisa On: May 24, 2006 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the layout, originality, and the pairing. great job, in fact i demand an encore, are you going to turn this into a fic or what? i'd like to see how they work out theyre differences, not to mention how funny its going to be when they torture koenma. i want... nay, i need to see the rest of it. you tease me with unfinished writing... anyway im not sure if this is secure, i mean if its read by other ppl than the author if your going to finish it (cause i consider it unfinished) email me at lisawilliams123@msn.com ok...love ya bye bye.
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Reviewed By: TORYALE [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The way you write your stories are just amazing... Are you going to continue the story to show what takes place afterwards, if you are please do so soon. It is great anyways so I hope yu get to finish it...Thanks...um..bye for now.
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Title: AWSOME!
Reviewed By: newbe On: April 07, 2006 05:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay that was just...I don't know! There is no words to express how very...very...very interesting this fic is. I must say that I truly enjoy it and must force myself to say that was the best IYxYYH crossover ever. I've never said this before to any other, so please, I beg you to take to heart. I'm a very honest person so I'll tell you that now you've just became my number one idol for I one day hope that I could become a great writer and I really look up to your work. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic. my likey.
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Reviewed By: Djqvee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was an awesome story and youre such a great writer!!!
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Reviewed By: dark crystal On: March 08, 2006 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the pairing that you did! But I wonder? Is there going to be another part to this fic? I don't know, but seems to be missing something. It just seems to me that you could continue it into another fic. Anyways, keep writing!
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Reviewed By: gcdv nli On: February 23, 2006 15:02 CST
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I don't know wut to say to that! lol
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Title: ravenstarfire89
Reviewed By: ravenstarfire89 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it! Are you working on updating your other stories as well? Like absolute power?(hint hint) Just wondering. I like most of your stories. Your a really great writer! ^O^
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Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So.. for once i'm not going to attach myself to you pathetically, whinging and crying about how cruel you are with your fantastic oneshots. While this is horrifically wonderful, and I was to slap you silly for being such a fabulous author.. I think this is perfect as a oneshot. It flowed very smoothly, and the ending just makes me crack up with all the possibilites. Ye gods. xD Poor kagome, having to put up with three such tempers. While i'd like to read one of the disputes I'll just have to content myself with snickering drakly over the imagined wars. Lovely, lovely. -heart-
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Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are good as always! Are you sure that this HAVE TO be a One-shot?!?!?! Oh and, please update all of your other stories too!
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