| "For Control" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 19:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was good, i would like a chapter with them at the gathering and kagome getting sess to spar with hiei and another chapter where she gets her prize
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Title: For Control
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Update soon. Can't wait to read the shock of Hiei when he finds that Kagome knows Sesshomaru.
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Reviewed By: Hieiluver05 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 22:48 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON. GREAT STORY>
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh nice! Even though Inuyasha is my favorite Kagome boy toy, I love Heie/Kagome pairings. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kagome4Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 18:57 CST
Comment/Review:
This story is good...
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Reviewed By: Aria-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 10:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn girl!! the pictures you give me!! and go kagome!! *laugs wickedly at the things kagome would do to Hiei when she wins that bet...* Thanks and Update soon! *smiles*
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Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: inu_kags_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 06:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats was a very interesting fic at first i though u were talking about sesshomaru but it made a lot more sense around the middle its a very good one i think just for a fic that has sexual scenes in it so keep up the good work
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Title: For Control
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 02:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: For Control
Reviewed By: crimsonred456 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats was a very interesting fic at first i though u were talking about sesshomaru but it made a lot more sense around the middle its a very good one i think just for a fic that has sexual scenes in it so keep up the good work
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