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| "What a Boy Wants" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: darkokita [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! That was some serious hot-ness. It would be interesting to know what the 'object' being used was. I can't imagine who the seme would be. All of the gang, and even Pegasus, are either too small or too slender to match the description. Very nice job.
| Title: Smile smile
Reviewed By: Me On: April 30, 2006 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was an... interesting story.... I really want to know who the Seme was though.... I would laugh my ass off if it turned out to be Jounouchi... XD I kinda figured Seto to either be a seme... or a Masochist uke.... both pics... just... tee hee
| Title: um...
Reviewed By: A Shade; nothing more, nothing less On: March 14, 2006 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay. I see I'm the first to reveiw... Well, first off, I gave you a 5 in the style of writing section because this is just one giant clump of a paragraph. I dunno if that qualifies as style, but I had to put it in there anyways. The writing itself was great. Just make it into paragraphs and it'll be SO MUCH BETTER!!! Thanks!
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