Reviewed By: jc On: February 15, 2006 10:20 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Comment/Review: please change the formatting of the later chapters! they have no structure whatsoever, and many people arent going to read it for that reason. I gave up reading it after two chapters of it! Otherwise, i thought it had some potential.
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