| "In a Blue Moon (Mpreg version)" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: jennifer P On: January 20, 2010 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is one of the top greatest storys that i have ever read in a long time thank for putting it up.
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Reviewed By: Rozella On: June 18, 2008 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying the story thus far and the excellent premise and prose. I especially like the originality of using Sesshoumaru's markings in that way. However, I am miffed at the abrupt ending of chapter three, when the words end suddenly like so: 'Yes. Without stopping to think, I am almost instantly behind him, claws slashing… He dodges again, but barely. I ni' Which suggests that the rest of the chapter has been cut off for some reason. An assumption that became more apparent as I moved onto the next chapter which did not in any way continue what came before and seemed particularly divergent with the entrance of Kagome and the well. Subsequently I find myself unable to pursue the story any further.
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 04:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh that was a sad yet seet story i really like it alot, but at last I have to get ready for work and school for I hant slep toight.. 6 hour energy drinks really work
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Reviewed By: sadness On: September 08, 2007 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't stop reading this, but I can't believe you did that!!!!!!! I almost cried...*sigh* anyways, great story
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Title: RogueSpike
Reviewed By: Lord Sesshomaru 5 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 04:02 CDT
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it occurs to me that I totally forgot to leave my email so you could tell me (if you have time, anyway) if there is another fic. :-P its Spikelover203@yahoo.com thanks RogueSpike
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Reviewed By: RogueSpike On: July 14, 2007 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Huh? Looked like they ended up together to me. lol. Totally awesome, that one chap had me scared to death though! lol. Kinda funny how fast Sess and Inu went at it afterwards. The whole thing was great, definately saving this in my favorites. is there a sequel? With lots more slashy goodness? :-D hope so, do tell me where I can find it if there is one! RogueSpike
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Reviewed By: RogueSpike On: July 13, 2007 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far I really really like this fic! Especially the way you made his moon and stripes so sensative, that was neat. Normally I don't like fics from a certain POV but the way you've written it makes it better, since his mind is fighting Inuyasha but his body isn't. It wouldn't be as neat if you wrote it normally, so kudos for that. :-D. One question, at the end of the third chap (I think) it ends abruptly with a word getting cut off. what happened to the rest of it? just curious, I don't want to miss a word of this! :-D I'll review again when I finish the fic. RogueSpike
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 22:14 CDT
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aweee lol it was kinda chessy but o weell i have a question tho does inu-maru call inuyasha uncle 2? anyway i hope u rite the sequel :)
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is this a newer updated one one from AFF?
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Title: please update
Reviewed By: Lil' Pyro On: August 15, 2006 14:35 CDT
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PLEASE WRITE WHAT HAPPENS! UPDATE SOON! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAS(suddenly passes out from lack of oxygen)
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Reviewed By: sesshykoi0106 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 23:30 CDT
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What in the hell is your problem?!!!!!! i can't believe you did that i had a heart attack!!!! (well maybe not a HEART attack exactly) but close enough!!!! *brings out an ak47* UPDATE NOW *author brings out machine gun* I mean ....um..... update.... *author puts hand on trigger* ....please
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Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You little shit! You leave such a cliff hanger and don't update in, like, Forever! *sigh* If I have never reviewed, it is because I was uncertain what was drawing me to the fic other than a great plot. I know that for plot purposes that Sess has to be major OOC. I just find myself feeling strange about it. Otherwise, great fic, great cliffhangers, smooth writing. Nice read. On a more immature note. I want Naraku's ass kicked into hell, Sesshoumaru regaining his strength and pride, Inuyasha to stop being such a baka! Whew! Sorry about the rant. I guess I'm pretty well into the fic. LOL===Hope you update soon! Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 00:57 CST
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Oooooh. I cannot believe that you left it there! Great fic.
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Reviewed By: kibibi On: March 09, 2006 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i ve read this story a ton of times and i just can't get enough this was a great story keep it up.
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Reviewed By: LynnGryphon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with JC, your chapters need reformatting (thats the 6/10). It was a royal pain reading those. Also, that was SO mean with that last chappie! I'm hoping the last two chapters you promised will be a little happier atleast (No killing Inu-Maru!!)! Otherwise, the writing and story wasn't bad at all.
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