| "Love's Complications" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Can i torture Pan?
Reviewed By: Fuyuna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2008 05:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know? this fic is the 2nd stroy that broke my heart succesfully. And i think, while the first one broke my heart too, i just feel sorry for the female main chara and rather annoy with male chara ( That's a Dull Metal panic story, so i mean poor Kaname). BUT!!! i never really hate the other women to death like this. I never like Pan, i never bother to read PanxTrunks or PanxGoten, but now i will become her most enemy here!!! I read this because of Vegeta. I love BulmaxVegeta. and i became really addicted to them thanks to my fav author. No, i didn't want to flame you or anything. I just want to vocalize my opinion, sorry if you feel offended. and i realize that you already put the warning. it just, I cannot stand Pan!!! She's really WHORE, BITCH!!! I agree with Bra, she's fuck anything with cock. And hell, she's so dare to say" i never meant to hurt anyone, is just i didn't think someone will find out, please forgive me, don't tell anyone" Oh yeah, eat my smelly socks first!!! How dare she said that, while she forced Vegeta to bond with her, doesnt she realize that will announce her affair officialy. Acting innocent while taking advantage Briefs family. Her brain must be on her cunt!!! She's disgusting!!! She's tainted the name of the women in the world (uh oh...did i exaggerate that one? never mind) And i regreting Vegeta here, although she doesn't love Bulma anymore, he should show some respect here and he shouldnt raise his hand to his children for cock whore!!! Anyway, my point is, they deserve punishment!!! NEVER ENDING TORTURE!!! Please oh mighty author, grant my wish. Let the baby Pan carry die!! At least make it become IDIOT!! And then make their life miserable, make Vegeta go crazy and than torture Pan in his craziness. Make them dont want live anymore but cannot die either. And please, i hope no one will ever forgive them forever!! Not even Trunks or Videl who still pity them. Not even Goku, not anyone will do. ( And i believe, Chichi will not forgive them, at least i found something i like in Chichi personality here, yes i know she will never forgive them) except you make her which i hope not. And i personally, will burn Pan's c**t with fire so she will never be able do that with Vegeta, stitch her mouth and cut her ni***e PLEASE OH MIGHTY AUTHOR, GRANT MY WISHES!!! I BOW TO YOU!!!
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Title: Love's Complications
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 03:07 CDT
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I think this story is very realistic. I could see it happening, them training together and forming a bond. I just thought you portrayed Bulma not enough, her reactions and suspicions. she should have noticed something.But other then that, a very good story.
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Title: god dang it
Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 17:19 CDT
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no offence, but i hate emotional rollercosters like this, but other wise it was very good.
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I was hesitant to read this of course having never read (at least I don't recall) this pairing before in a romantice setup. Its definately original and the characters are in the right frame of mind. I think its cruel how you left the story hanging by a few fingers on a cliff. (and I though pixelgoddess was the queen of cliffhangers). Well, I look forward to the sequel now that you've perked my interest. Good luck.
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Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 04:22 CDT
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I think your story is very original. I've never read a story that would go on after the part of the actual cheating. Please continue.
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Title: Getting tense and good
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very impressed with how you're handling the character relationships. I can emphathize with each character's pain. It was difficult to read in many ways because I felt very sad for all of them, but you've carried off a VERY realistic portrayal of this situation. Bravo.
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Title: WHAT?
Reviewed By: kane shi megami not logged in [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH f*ck! That was a horrible cliff hanger, I sure do hope that you update soon or I\'ll have to come find you! and by the way, I wrote oh f*ck because that\'s what I said outloud when I read this! And seriously is bra that stupid?
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Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: ghoul [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I have never ever found a story this addictive, I can't stop reading and check my mail everyday to see if there's new chapters :o I really like how their relationship has progressed, from her being a little child to a young woman. I think the story is very original and I will follow your story to the end! :D (Even though, I kind of hope it doesn't ;p)
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Title: Surprisingly good
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 12:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although I'm not a huge fan of Vegeta/Pan, you have a way of making this relationship plausible in the fiction from a mentor/student relationship. From the way you've plotted this I can see it happening from the closeness they're developing. I'm intrigued to see where this would go. But would Vegeta leave Bulma for Pan? It will be quite a show of fireworks when I see what you have up your sleeve for this inevitable confrontation. I'm curious to find out.
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Title: Love's Complications
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Love's Complications
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Love's Complications
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Love's Complications
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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