| "a forgotten love and a forgotten child" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 02:06 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really am liking the story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP!!! WHAT SUSPENSE!! YOU'R THE BEST!
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Title: Great! :D
Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 17:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job, I love this story! I liked this line lol: "She looks more like Inuyasha trying to get out of a bath" I can't wait to see what happens next, so please update when you have the chance! ^_^
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 04:51 EDT
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i love your work but it can be hard to read once and a while because of misspellings but if you put your heart to it i bet you can do it. keep up the excelent work and im really really looking forword to the chapters that lay ahead.
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 08:58 EDT
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Woohooo! A New chapter! Woot! I hope Kagome goes through the well and she and Inuyasha are forced together again. Qoute quote, forced, end quote. Can't wait for more updates!
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Title: good
Reviewed By: meiscrazy4_Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 07:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is turning out to be a good story can't wait till the end
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Title: Good job! :D
Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 15:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! This story is really creative, and i love reading it! I can't wait to see what happens to Kaida! Please update whenever u have time! ^_^
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Title: Great chaper! ^_^
Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 00:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! It is so original, and it is enjoyable to read! I especially loved this part lol: He wouldn't of gotten too far anyway...with that load he's carying -_- Great job, and keep up the good work! :D
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Reviewed By: kagome9854 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 17:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter.She gets to meet Shippo now! ^_^ Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 13:42 EDT
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I review! i like this story, but Kaida is a little... scared for a hanyou. no ones gonna hurt her... i hope. she's in da feudal era! what happens? updates!
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Reviewed By: chiyosama808 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 15:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi! I really like the emotion that you put into the story and the characters. Things sound good. I hope that things work themselves out in the end. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 22:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the chaps were boring but the plot was good. I sorta had the same idea for my fanfic, A better Future? try to entice with some suspense
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Title: inyo
Reviewed By: inyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 18:26 EST
Comment/Review:
plz update sooner i love your fic
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Title: inyo
Reviewed By: inyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 18:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was awesome .plz update sooner cause i dont like waiting
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 18:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story! It is really kawaii! ^_^ Plz write more asap!
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Reviewed By: Sacred Four Loves [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 18:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this story ~*~ Please write more, I really want to know how Kagome will react once she see Inuyasha again and how Kaida will react when she finds out that her best-friends, Inuyasha, is really her father!!!
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